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A Tiny Town

This tiny town in early morning gives me gaps in the sound of the light taps of my footstep, pauses that are rich silences. Then I stand still - stand still and listen without hearing, listen to a vacuum, a void of sound. That silence is then pierced. She has emitted the sweetest cry. It is an early-morning voice. This is a new day's birth. (23 March 2022)

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Date: 5/9/2022 9:05:00 AM
Your "A Tiny Town" sounds wonderful. Have a blessed day writing away.............
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Date: 4/1/2022 3:00:00 PM
Dear Andrew, your poem portrays a serene picture of a tiny town in the early morning - I would love to be there and experience - can imagine that silence - "a void of sound." This is a remarkable poem expressing deeply felt emotion. Best wishes ~ Mala
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Andrew John
Date: 4/2/2022 2:06:00 AM
Thank you so much. The town is Carmarthen, Wales, UK. Probably not as quiet as that, but I am often walking in the very early hours (I'm an early getter-up).

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