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A Tiny House

Down a winding road At the very end Is a tiny house standing Near a forest pass Its a tiny house With two trees standing In front of windows They are very tall No lights seen inside The trees blocks the light This house is abandon No one lives there now

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Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 9/29/2024 5:16:00 AM

Hi darling Darlene, what a cute, cute poem by a cute, cute poetess. Hope you are keeping well my friend. Blessings and hugs, Jennifer.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 9/29/2024 9:22:00 AM

Hello Jennifer, so nice to see you on my page I am fine thank you. How are I am happy to see you. Hugs. /Darlene/ you doing? You must be very busy. Hugs. Darlene/

Vilmos Zoltan Galyo

Date: 9/28/2024 3:16:00 PM

Darlene, is this your house? I have a similar one in my original home.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 9/28/2024 3:34:00 PM

Hello Vilmos, No , it is a bhouse in my imagination. I did not know that a small house would exist. Yet you do have a small house. Where is your original home? Enjoy your weekend. my friend. /Darle4ne/.

Maria Williams

Date: 9/26/2024 3:35:00 AM

A lovely little picture poem Darlene - they say less is more and you certainly put less and the rest is left to imagining - just like looking at an a historic artefact, so to speak and getting absorbed in reflection. Hugs Maria

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 9/26/2024 10:42:00 AM

Hello Maria Williams, Yes Maria you are right. Hugs. /Darlene/

Sally Eslinger

Date: 9/25/2024 4:05:00 AM

Darlene, there is excellent imagery and emotional impact in this “Tiny House” series. Quite creative!

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 9/26/2024 10:43:00 AM

Hello Sally, Yes Ihave used my imagination on this poem. Thank you for this wonderful comment. Hugs. /Darlene/

Peonieslore xo

Date: 9/23/2024 10:30:00 PM

Though I'd visit the first part.. just as wonderful. Thank you for this sweet write Darlene.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 9/24/2024 9:37:00 AM

Hello Peoniesiore, I am pleased to see you again. Thank you for the wonderful comment. Enjoy your day my friend. /Darlene/xo

Krishnanand Guptar

Date: 9/20/2024 12:02:00 PM

A quick snapshot with words to create a lovely write. With my love for solitude , I would have wished to dwell in that little house, at least for some time. Wish you a pleasant week-end ahead.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 9/21/2024 10:12:00 AM

Hello Keishnanand Guptaar, So nice to see you here. Thank you for this lovely comment. Blessings my friend. /Darlene/

Karen Croft

Date: 9/17/2024 5:25:00 PM

A picture perfect poem!

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 9/18/2024 11:17:00 AM

Hello Karen, Hi, thank you for this wondserful comment. Hugs. /Darlene/

Tom Woody

Date: 9/12/2024 2:37:00 PM

Elves grow old too and have to go to the old folks home. Jus sayin

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 9/12/2024 2:50:00 PM

Hello Tom, yes elves dogrow old. and go to the old f.loks home. yes just aq saying. rnjoy your evening my friend. /Darlene/

Ink Empress

Date: 9/9/2024 1:47:00 PM

Dear darlene, so descriptive how youv painted imagery, i can see through your well written words talented soul! So vivid and soulful! Pleasure reading your poem, on tiny house, sending you light always

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 9/9/2024 3:36:00 PM

Hello Ink Express, ,so nice to see you on my page thank you, for this lovely comment. Thank you for the light. Enjoy your evening my friend. Hugs. /Darlene/

John Read

Date: 9/9/2024 8:59:00 AM

A tiny house full of memories enjoyed reading your poem Darlene.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 9/9/2024 10:44:00 AM

Hello John Read, so nice to meet you. Yes a house full of memories for someone. thankyou folr the lovely comment Enjoy your day my friend. /Darlene/

Heidi Sands

Date: 9/8/2024 11:04:00 AM

Great poem Darlene. I can see it :)

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 9/8/2024 3:31:00 PM

Hello Heidi, thank you for the wonderful comment. Hugs. /Darlene/

Alesia Leach

Date: 9/7/2024 3:25:00 PM

I wonder what stories the house could tell? Great imagery.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 9/8/2024 11:02:00 AM

Hello Alesia, I have been wonderiing the samew thing. Thank you for the lovely comment. enjoy your day my friend. /DArlene/

Joe Dimino

Date: 9/7/2024 8:36:00 AM

Oh could that forest pass speak, of all who exited and returned -- Very enchanting poetry. Brilliant! Profound for those who have deeper ears and inner Light turned on. Amazing! You get a FAV! My POTD for the day.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 9/7/2024 9:53:00 AM

Hello Joe Di Mino, Thank you Joe for the fav. It that forest could speak imagine the stories it would tell. Yes Profound for those that have deeper ears and inner light. Thank you once again for the fav. Enjoy your weekend. my friend. /Darlene/

Gershon Wolf

Date: 9/5/2024 8:08:00 PM

You think Tiny Tim ever lived there?!

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 9/6/2024 10:16:00 AM

YOu knoqw Gershon, it could be possible. Enjoy your dcay my frkien d. Enjoy your weekend. /Darlene/

Silent One

Date: 9/5/2024 1:04:00 PM

Great imagination dear...

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 9/5/2024 3:05:00 PM

Hello Silent One, So nice to see yuou here on my page. Thank you for ther lovely comment. Enjoy your evening my friend. /Darlene/

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 9/5/2024 12:07:00 PM

This is a magical write/story. Maybe a part 2 is on the way??? Have a blessed day writing away...........

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 9/12/2024 2:53:00 PM

Hello Paula, sorry for the late response. Part 2? oh! i will give some thought. thank you for the idea. Hugs. /Darlene/Hugs. /Darlene/

Sam Kauffman

Date: 9/3/2024 10:52:00 AM

Darlene, there is a plaintive melancholy of abandonment in your little house at the end of the road. What an imaginative metaphor for all those who are abandoned! Heartbreaking. Wonderfully written. Thank you for this wonderfully written poem. Blessings to you.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 9/3/2024 2:35:00 PM

Hello Sam Kauffman, Yes houses that are abandoned it is heart breaking to see these house the way they are now. Beyond fixing. Once a beautiful house. Your welcome. Hugs. /Darlene/ Hugs.

Saleh Ben Saleh

Date: 9/3/2024 9:10:00 AM

Hello Darlene, I have imagine it a beautiful house somewhere near a mystical forest. But when you say that there is no light inside the house and that it's abandoned, this give them impression that there is no hope. I would like to hear your thoughts. Your friend Saleh

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 9/3/2024 9:45:00 AM

Hello Seleh, Okay here is my thoughts about the house. : the house is abandoned. No one lives there. the trees in front of the windows are over grown. That is why there is no light coming into the house. No sunshine goes into the house. so inside would be dark. My friend. enjoy your day. / Darlene/

Saleh Ben Saleh
Date: 9/3/2024 9:11:00 AM

Arthur Vaso

Date: 8/31/2024 11:47:00 PM

Beautiful, I imagined this poem as a painting as I was reading it.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 9/1/2024 12:10:00 PM

Hello Arthur, Thank you Arthur. I hope all is well with you. Enjoying the long weekend? Enjoy your week. My friejnd /Darlene/

Karen Croft

Date: 8/31/2024 7:39:00 PM

The sound of your tiny house makes me think of a hidden house in the woods. Enjoyed reading.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 9/1/2024 12:12:00 PM

Hello Karen, there are hideen houses in the woods. I use to visit someone in the woods 8 years ago. she built her house by herself. Hugs. /Darlene/

Susan Ashley

Date: 8/31/2024 5:06:00 PM

Dear Darlene, your intriguing poem makes me wonder who used to live in the tiny house. I enjoyed your vivid imagery and the mystery of the abandoned house. Warmest wishes my dear friend.. ~Susan

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 9/1/2024 12:16:00 PM

Hello Susan, I havce n o clue who lived in this tiny house. I saw it and wrote a poem about this house. There is a mystery to this house, but i do not know what it is. enjoy your weekend my dear friend. /Darlene/

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 8/31/2024 4:33:00 PM

I get the feeling the trees are protecting the house, maybe they were present when the family lived there once, nice poem Darlene

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 9/1/2024 12:18:00 PM

Hello Mystic Rose, Rose, I think you are right. the trees protecting the house. I thi9nk the trees were there when the family lived there. Hugs. /Darlene/

Abdullah Alhemaidy

Date: 8/31/2024 3:59:00 PM

Very interesting & wonderful write in my view! I had seen a house like that in Macomb, IL, country side

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 9/1/2024 12:23:00 PM

Hello Abdullah, omg! Wow! that is incredible. blessings my friend. /Darlene/

Marilene Evans

Date: 8/31/2024 1:44:00 PM

I wonder what went down in that house or if something is still going on there in the dark, will never know. Have a good weekend.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 8/31/2024 3:01:00 PM

Hello Marliene, the house is empty. No light goes into the house because threes block the windows. I will. the same for you. Hugs. /Darlene/

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 8/31/2024 1:26:00 PM

The imagination wonders who used to live in the teeny tine house with the too (two) tall trees. The lights are not on. Went to my sister’s shop where I worked with wood and a stencil to paint a house in the woods. The original had dark windows and door…oh no, I had to ensure someone was home! Cheers, sweet one! Enjoyed this very much!

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 8/31/2024 3:04:00 PM

Hello Kim, The imagination does not know who lived in that house. Thank you Kim. Hugs. x /Darlene/