A Time of Change

A time of change awaits you, friend. It crouches on your track. It peeps its head round yonder bend and knows you can’t go back. And being time, itself it bides, (albeit a time of change). You cannot know how well it hides and still be in your range! Your path might be a jolly jaunt when suddenly appears that deviation there to daunt you in the coming years. A monster ever stalking you. . . then one day it may pale, and thankfully you start anew upon another trail. Or maybe you’ve gone traipsing down a road of misery, and wishing only you could drown, you stand beside a sea. But look! What beckons you away? A time of change, (no beast) has handed you a bright new day and hopelessness has ceased! for Giorgio's Impress Me IV Contest
Motif: Philosophical
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Macfarlane Avatar
February 17, 2014 at 3:25 PM
This is an inspiring and amazing write Andrea....big congrats on your win! Hugs
Kayode Avatar
February 13, 2014 at 3:23 AM
Congrats on this great poem Andrea.
Maverick Avatar
February 12, 2014 at 11:06 AM
This Is a very serendipity of a write Andrea...It mirrors I fear my feelings in efforts to friend you on FB.. LOL, I wrote you soup mail, as I'd thought all about it; then sent it to myself..HA HA anyway congrats on the win..'
May Avatar
February 12, 2014 at 8:44 AM
Congrats on your big win Andrea
Andresen Avatar
February 12, 2014 at 2:57 AM
- Another contest sponsored by: Giorgio V. - "Impress me IV" - CONGRATULATIONS ON YOUR WINNING POEM,ANDREA - ENJOYABLE TO READ YOURS AND A PLEASURE TO PARTICIPATE :))) - Anne-Lise :)
Loving Iii Avatar
February 11, 2014 at 6:07 PM
Andria, I'm lookong for change so hard that this almost bring tears to my eyes. not to say the least that it was writen very very well. not one word out of place. all the rhyming was perfect. and this seems to be a Divine message to me personally. i know that it should have been up lifting and it is. but for me personally it means so much. so if your poetry has a purpose it was fulfilled in this. you earned no.1 for a reason. and one thing i can say about Georgio he has been well at choosing no1
Loving Iii Avatar
February 11, 2014 at 6:08 PM
going to fav.
Richards Avatar
February 11, 2014 at 4:49 PM
You are on a roll !!! Terrific once again!! My hats off to you Andrea!!!
Cavanaugh Avatar
September 2, 2013 at 8:24 PM
Wow, I love this poem. I love the way you weaved your thoughts on the page and how the poem developed to the very end. And what a lovely ending it was. Great write.
Johnson Avatar
May 22, 2013 at 4:46 PM
Never give up, God is faithful. That's a passage in the bible. Your poen exemplifies that message. Keep the faith.
Horne Avatar
May 19, 2013 at 11:55 AM
love this upbeat write, my friend
Oyewole Avatar
May 19, 2013 at 10:38 AM
I love this. Well done. AO
Hicks Avatar
May 19, 2013 at 1:03 AM
Hope you don't mind me starting conversations on your poems or anything (let me know if that bugs you!). Concerning Jack Reacher, the move is great if you don't think about the books on which they are based off of. If you think of it as a Tom Cruise movie then I'm sure it's quite enjoyable. In the books Jack Reacher is described as being a hulking giant (Tom Cruise is quite short and not what I'd call a big dude).
Castro Avatar
May 18, 2013 at 10:32 PM
Hehehe love it 7up!!!
Hicks Avatar
May 18, 2013 at 12:17 AM
I never actually got the chance to enter into the contest... it ended too soon. Oh well... no biggie! Glad you liked my story though!
Tacito Avatar
May 17, 2013 at 3:04 PM
This is terrific. Hell of an ending. Great work!
Kovrlija Avatar
May 17, 2013 at 10:07 AM
A lovely poem
Hunter Avatar
May 17, 2013 at 8:24 AM
Love the flow of this, Andrea. You've captured the feeling of change in it very well...the fear...the release...Great!
De Paz Avatar
May 17, 2013 at 7:00 AM
Perfect verses and alight of optimism.
Maverick Avatar
May 17, 2013 at 6:48 AM
Great piece as usual Andrea, It gets you thinking on that 'change thing' dear poet I shall go off now to check out your latest post..take care Joe..'
Devnath  Avatar
May 16, 2013 at 12:14 PM
Excellently penned about the time. Good luck in the contest. Loved always, bl
Horsman Avatar
May 16, 2013 at 9:29 AM
Time does change Andrea, but not the quality of your poetry, your gift is for life, Utah Girl,,
Jordan Avatar
May 16, 2013 at 8:38 AM
A reprieve from darkness and despair. Fine writing. Good luck in the contest... Jack
Loving Iii Avatar
May 16, 2013 at 6:49 AM
Every line of this poem is about my life now. Even to the last line and homelessness. But there is a glimmer of light. My God finally moving to my future. This piece is a my miracle.
Roberts Avatar
May 15, 2013 at 11:44 PM
Lovely poem Andrea.....Seren
Hicks Avatar
May 15, 2013 at 10:36 PM
Well you've certainly surprised this reader. I loved the thoughtful and inviting feel of this poem. Change is the most natural thing in the world and it's always there to surprise you... around the corner. Fantastic piece!
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