Shane Brown Poet I do not know?

A Time For Hope

I am not what is seen
I hold in the deeper things
My heart holds his strong lock and key
And pitiful regret chiefly sings.

The sun is yet to be realized
And the moon is only a shadow
I am what night constructs
In the stolen hope of a broken tomorrow.

I fight and I toss into calamity
Realized emotions that go untamed
My soul sown together in ugly fashion
And left unnamed.

What is all of this for?
With only empty worth
I look into the torn open sky
For new idea’s birth.

I will strongly await my delivery of peace
And I may learn how to be scrupulous.
The risk upon an independent prayer
Does so yield a soul renewed and victorious.

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Linda-Marie Sweetheart March 22, 2011 at 7:57 PM Welcome to Poetry Soup.. enjoyed reading your poetry tonight with it's creative theme .. hope your time on Soup will be fun and filled with sharing with luv.. our contests are free.. check them out and good luck luv..

Shane Brown March 22, 2011 at 6:54 PM Thank you all for your generous comments on my writing... I plan on posting more soon :) Britishkid16

Nancy Smith March 22, 2011 at 2:02 PM Pretty powerful muse.... I think many poets know exactly what you are saying, and may have many of the same feelings too.

Carol Sunshine Brown March 22, 2011 at 10:54 AM I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Shane. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. Enter and enjoy some of the contests and I wish you the best in them. Love, Carol

Constance La France March 22, 2011 at 10:06 AM Welcome to the soup, I enjoyed reading your poem, keep up the excellent writing~~

Dr.Ram Mehta March 21, 2011 at 5:40 PM Creative and interesting write, Shane, devotional and thoughtful