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A Thousand Memories In One Space Held

Host of the oceans dream liquid silver spellbound wishes Satin silk dressed cream under your cradle howling Music within darkness shadows dance to your tune lullaby over and back echoes held inside a warm breathless whisper Takes the breath away completely sparks burning as through the dust falling at your feet starlight twinkles each a refection of your beam mirrors

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Debbie Duncan

Date: 3/12/2018 10:44:00 PM

Very nice, I love the line " echoes held inside a warm breathless whisper" :)

Dorian Petersen Potter

Date: 3/19/2017 11:38:00 PM

Hi Liam!:))Wow!Wow!Wow!This is the most very beautiful romantic tender sweet passionate n' captivating love poem you've written here my dearest friend Liam.Just dazzling!All so very beautifully written.Just awesome!Another very beautiful,sparkling diamond from your very golden glowing pen.I love it!A most very beautiful heartfelt romantic dreamy heart melting away enchanting love poem to be held very close to my heart.smiling.This is so very beautiful n' sweet! Just wonderful!I truly enjoy it!A true glowing golden gem.Your pen is truly mighty golden!A 7 + + + + +!A Fav!To me you're always the best in everything Liam.So very beautiful romantic gentle and sweet.I really hope n' pray alot you're okay in everything, Liam.Please keep positive.Always keeping you in my thoughts n' prayers.Keep your faith!Keep your love hopes n' follow your dreams always too:))Wishing you a very lovely week!In His light God bless you always!:))Love n' hugs!xoxox D.^O^

Phil Capitano

Date: 3/19/2017 8:51:00 PM

Very cool Liam, love the shadows dancing.