A Thousand Fire Children

An otherworldly sanctum of velvet and glitter
breathing slowly, eyes enthralled
all in a flitter

Charms of scents flood like a Delta wave
becomes your keeper, oh foul charity!
into a web of the unsaved

It followed me home, cloaked in frosty white
and bathed me in the beauty of the
southern night

This pain is like a dessert of whortleberries and lime
even with my eyes closed, my sanctuary
burned through time

All in this abyss, this requiem, a frilltalon clan
return and close control, and with shadows
they ran

It glows soft yet black as lust
consumes with cruel loyalty and 
burns your soul to dust

Such a delicious tragedy of honeysuckle shame
smiles hide so many things, that even I
had forgotten my name!

There are thousands on fire, high on nectar dreams
floating in the bright dark, then the
sherbert sun melts them in a scream
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

Poem

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Guzzi Avatar
January 7, 2010 at 6:41 AM
Such a wonderful beginning. I love the land. I want to hear more of its inhabitants, very skilled use of language! "delicious tragedy of honeysuckle shame" Great line! Light & Love
Haick Avatar
January 5, 2010 at 3:40 PM
Congratulations, on your poem being featured this week on the Soup! Peace, Audrey
Fraser Avatar
January 5, 2010 at 8:47 AM
Many congratulations on your fine poetry being featured this week, Happy New Year to you >> James
Brown Avatar
January 4, 2010 at 3:43 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Carrie. May you have may more. Love, Carol
Brown Avatar
September 24, 2009 at 3:10 PM
Congratulations on your poem making it through the first round Carrie.Wishing you the best in the finals. Love, Carol
Get a Premium Membership
Turn off ads, get more exposure for your poetry, and get more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Diverse Voices: The Poetry of Human Rights and the Pursuit of Peace