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A Thousand Beautiful Pieces

When you said I love you and I said I love you, and we said I do, I do and talked about our future; I remember we were so happy and everyday was special, and you held me stroking my hair close to your beating heart; and when you left .. I was broken in a thousand beautiful pieces, oh, I will remember this love ... that even dark death cannot erase ! _____________________ May 21, 2021 Poetry/Verse/A Thousand Beautiful Pieces Copyright Protected, ID 05-1357-213-21 All Rights Reserved, 2021, Constance La France Written for the Standard contest. Charm Me ~ sponsor, Line Gauthier, Judged 05/23/2021 Honorable Mention

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Date: 5/27/2021 10:32:00 AM
Congratulations on your win, Constance. So thoughtfully written. Blessings and a hug!
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Constance La France
Date: 5/27/2021 11:55:00 AM
Sam, thank you for the comment and congratulations, I am a bit sad about the HM placement, but oh well, love _Constance
Date: 5/23/2021 9:35:00 PM
Superbly written as always, Constance! Congrats!
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Constance La France
Date: 5/24/2021 5:02:00 PM
Seeker, thanks for the compliment and congrats, peace _Constance
Date: 5/23/2021 7:14:00 PM
Congratulations, Constance, with this heartfelt poem in Line Gauthier's "Charm me," contest. . Hugs Eve
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Constance La France
Date: 5/24/2021 5:03:00 PM
Eve, thanks for the congratulations and the compliment, love _Constance
Date: 5/21/2021 9:20:00 AM
Beautiful poem and tribute to your love. Well-written.
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Constance La France
Date: 5/21/2021 10:31:00 AM
Milt, thank you for the compliment and comment, appreciate a lot, peace _Constance

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