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A Tanka Moment

the diary fell pages scattered the floor- just out of reach yesterday's dreams

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 8/17/2017 5:58:00 PM
Oh I love this very much! Awesome job Brian :)
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Brian Strand
Date: 8/17/2017 11:56:00 PM
Thank you so much Akkina
Date: 8/17/2017 4:51:00 AM
Ah, I adore the ambiguity here ... wonderfully-penned Tanka! Have a great day, Brian!
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Brian Strand
Date: 8/17/2017 6:43:00 AM
Will do ,thanks Greg
Date: 8/17/2017 4:01:00 AM
Very cool Brian, its funny how our dreams change over time, we are always searching for the pot o' gold.
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Brian Strand
Date: 8/17/2017 6:42:00 AM
Thanks Phil

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