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A Tall Grass Story

As I lie here, eyes half closed, I wonder
Why does the grass wave to me?
Has the summer breeze asked it to greet me
And if so, what does it wish to say
But I think the Chinese whispers of a thousand blades
Might confuse the message beyond recognition
Perhaps I should ask instead, the shaded underbelly of the lonesome oak,
Standing aloof mid-field
For surely he hears the same story from the breeze
And then again perhaps I have it all wrong, it's a message from the grass,
So many strands waving their message make the pleasant breeze
If that is the case then, I think I must lie here a while longer
And listen to the story they wish to tell
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Dietrich Avatar
October 15, 2010 at 8:02 AM
Nick, I am reviewing my list of fav poems. I could be here another hour. haha. This remains a classic for me! Have a nice day. Luv, Andrea
Hickman Avatar
September 29, 2010 at 3:53 AM
It gets better and better Nick, I would like to be able to listen and understand what Mother Nature, Flora and Fauna may be saying in their own languages. Gordon, (hicky)
Walsh Avatar
September 22, 2010 at 5:20 AM
I can visualise this - Liz
Mannan Avatar
July 26, 2010 at 9:50 PM
It is a lovely picture you have painted in this poem. I really felt the peace and the gentle breeze.
K. Avatar
July 23, 2010 at 6:50 AM
Hi Nick! I really really enjoyed this-- I could just literally close my eyes too and strain my own ears to listen to what those grass blades might tell me-- love, love how you say they are waving their message!! I think we should all take the time to do this you know?? Super enjoyed this one-- going to my faves! -- nikko :) and HAHA how TRUE is that?? I am serious-- my captcha for this comment really states TRUE!! sooo cool!!
Rich Avatar
July 13, 2010 at 6:55 AM
A beautiful read. Also thank you for your kind words on my latest if you have time please check out my saga, criminal part 3- ofcourse its not true just a story. Have a great day.
Sepulvado Anderson Avatar
July 13, 2010 at 5:41 AM
Very nice imagery here. Mother Nature has many stories to tell. Enjoyed reading this. Have a wonderful day! Scarlett
Rich Avatar
July 12, 2010 at 11:30 AM
Enjoyed this poetry today and will read more, thank you for your sopportive comments on my last, please check out my recent Criminals part 3 of course Fiction. Have a great day.
Kendrick Avatar
July 7, 2010 at 7:02 AM
Excellent use of metaphoric language in this one..Enjoyed reading your work..Keep the gift of the creative pen busy to overflow onto soup pages for all of us to enjoy...Sara
Brown Avatar
July 6, 2010 at 11:00 AM
I like this write - even the title is beautiful.
Rich Avatar
July 5, 2010 at 3:33 PM
Hello really enjoyed this poetry today and also will read more... Hope you will enjoy my poem/ story: Criminal-- part2 have a great day
 Avatar
July 5, 2010 at 12:17 PM
There is a lot of depth in this poem. Nice use of imagery. Well done! Thank you for sharing your thoughts with us and for your kind words on my poem. Karen
Dietrich Avatar
July 5, 2010 at 7:27 AM
WOW< this is an amazing poem. A fav for this one! (what real poetry should always do: make us see things in a new light) Luv, Andrea
Rich Avatar
July 4, 2010 at 1:51 PM
Enjoyed reading your poetry today.. I'm new to the soup so I hope you have an open mind as far as poetry. Enjoy ya day.
Lee Avatar
July 4, 2010 at 6:58 AM
I can't explain why, but I just love everything about this poem. I think it's especially the topic that grabbed me - how ridiculously delightful it is to write about grass! Thanks for sharing :) -Grace
Tideswell Avatar
July 4, 2010 at 5:38 AM
A lovely thought Nick, that all those whispering blades of grass have a story to tell. Enjoyed your poem ~ Sharon :)
A   Avatar
July 2, 2010 at 10:06 AM
ponderous thougts you seem to have, lovely thoughts in mind,, enjoyed..P.D.
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