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A Tall Grass Story

As I lie here, eyes half closed, I wonder Why does the grass wave to me? Has the summer breeze asked it to greet me And if so, what does it wish to say But I think the Chinese whispers of a thousand blades Might confuse the message beyond recognition Perhaps I should ask instead, the shaded underbelly of the lonesome oak, Standing aloof mid-field For surely he hears the same story from the breeze And then again perhaps I have it all wrong, it's a message from the grass, So many strands waving their message make the pleasant breeze If that is the case then, I think I must lie here a while longer And listen to the story they wish to tell

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 10/15/2010 8:02:00 AM
Nick, I am reviewing my list of fav poems. I could be here another hour. haha. This remains a classic for me! Have a nice day. Luv, Andrea
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Date: 9/29/2010 3:53:00 AM
It gets better and better Nick, I would like to be able to listen and understand what Mother Nature, Flora and Fauna may be saying in their own languages. Gordon, (hicky)
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Date: 9/22/2010 5:20:00 AM
I can visualise this - Liz
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Date: 7/26/2010 9:50:00 PM
It is a lovely picture you have painted in this poem. I really felt the peace and the gentle breeze.
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Date: 7/23/2010 6:50:00 AM
Hi Nick! I really really enjoyed this-- I could just literally close my eyes too and strain my own ears to listen to what those grass blades might tell me-- love, love how you say they are waving their message!! I think we should all take the time to do this you know?? Super enjoyed this one-- going to my faves! -- nikko :) and HAHA how TRUE is that?? I am serious-- my captcha for this comment really states TRUE!! sooo cool!!
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Date: 7/13/2010 6:55:00 AM
A beautiful read. Also thank you for your kind words on my latest if you have time please check out my saga, criminal part 3- ofcourse its not true just a story. Have a great day.
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Date: 7/13/2010 5:41:00 AM
Very nice imagery here. Mother Nature has many stories to tell. Enjoyed reading this. Have a wonderful day! Scarlett
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Date: 7/12/2010 11:30:00 AM
Enjoyed this poetry today and will read more, thank you for your sopportive comments on my last, please check out my recent Criminals part 3 of course Fiction. Have a great day.
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Date: 7/7/2010 7:02:00 AM
Excellent use of metaphoric language in this one..Enjoyed reading your work..Keep the gift of the creative pen busy to overflow onto soup pages for all of us to enjoy...Sara
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Date: 7/6/2010 11:00:00 AM
I like this write - even the title is beautiful.
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Date: 7/5/2010 3:33:00 PM
Hello really enjoyed this poetry today and also will read more... Hope you will enjoy my poem/ story: Criminal-- part2 have a great day
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Date: 7/5/2010 12:17:00 PM
There is a lot of depth in this poem. Nice use of imagery. Well done! Thank you for sharing your thoughts with us and for your kind words on my poem. Karen
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Date: 7/5/2010 7:27:00 AM
WOW< this is an amazing poem. A fav for this one! (what real poetry should always do: make us see things in a new light) Luv, Andrea
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Date: 7/4/2010 1:51:00 PM
Enjoyed reading your poetry today.. I'm new to the soup so I hope you have an open mind as far as poetry. Enjoy ya day.
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Date: 7/4/2010 6:58:00 AM
I can't explain why, but I just love everything about this poem. I think it's especially the topic that grabbed me - how ridiculously delightful it is to write about grass! Thanks for sharing :) -Grace
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Date: 7/4/2010 5:38:00 AM
A lovely thought Nick, that all those whispering blades of grass have a story to tell. Enjoyed your poem ~ Sharon :)
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Date: 7/2/2010 10:06:00 AM
ponderous thougts you seem to have, lovely thoughts in mind,, enjoyed..P.D.
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