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A Sweet Babys Love

first encountering emotions good and pleasant ~ mind and soul in cheer 5/30/2019 Poetry Contest: Writing Challenge 5, May 2019, Senryu Sponsored by: Dear Heart

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Date: 6/10/2019 3:40:00 PM
haha, I love how you played on my great grandma line. I think it's written great-grandma. Yep, neither of us is to THAT point yet. but give me five years and I think I will be one!! Congrats on your win here.
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Date: 6/10/2019 11:03:00 AM
Eve, congratulations on your win in my writing challenge with this wonderful Senryu~
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Date: 6/10/2019 2:27:00 AM
I love it Eve! Congratulations on your first placement! xxoo
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Date: 6/8/2019 12:57:00 PM
Cheers Grandma - a glass of champagne is surely due (for you I mean)- enjoy every moment Eve! Hugs, Jennifer.
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Date: 6/2/2019 7:48:00 AM
Yes, this sounds like the first time we see a baby... very sweet..
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Date: 6/1/2019 4:08:00 PM
You are a fantastic grandma for sure, Grandma!
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Date: 6/1/2019 1:42:00 PM
so obvious what a great grandma you are, Eve!
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Eve Roper
Date: 6/1/2019 2:59:00 PM
AWE!! a grandma, not yet a great grandma
Date: 5/30/2019 4:12:00 PM
oh so sweet Eve:-) hugs jan xx
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Eve Roper
Date: 5/30/2019 8:37:00 PM
Thank you, Jan… Hugs Eve
Date: 5/30/2019 3:36:00 PM
Lovely senryu Eve, love the last line. Good luck. Tom
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Eve Roper
Date: 5/30/2019 8:36:00 PM
Thank you, Tom..

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