Kash Poet Poet Rondeau

A Surprise Gift

A summer kiss on winter night
precious gift enough to ignite
my teenage mind with burning flame
a neighbouring dame with sweet name
a cage-free bird on its first flight.

Many years ago but still bright
in my mind like day's first sunlight
and how I enjoyed when it came
a summer kiss.

Like molten wax of candle light
lips melted as she held me tight
passion's fire was hard to be tamed
a surprise gift from that sweet dame
taste of manhood on winter night
a summer kiss.





© kashinath karmakar (19th December 2011)
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Placement:7th (Dec.2011)

Contest:Gifts Given,Gifts Received a Rondeau

Sponsor:Cyndi Macmillan

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Gwendolen Song February 22, 2012 at 7:23 PM Kash...had to reread this one as it is such a rare treat! Smashingly awesome. Gwendolen

Onyebuchi Okonkwo January 9, 2012 at 3:20 AM Good Rondeau Kash. Congrats on your win.One Love~O.O.

Sara Kendrick January 5, 2012 at 4:39 PM Congrats on your winning work..Sara

Jon Arno January 5, 2012 at 4:30 PM Congratulations on your beautiful write Best regards, Jon

David Williams January 5, 2012 at 7:58 AM Kash congrats on your win, well done..David

Carol Sunshine Brown January 5, 2012 at 6:15 AM Congratulations on your win in ~Cyndi's~ "Gifts Given--Received" contest Kash. Love, Carol

Bob Quigley January 4, 2012 at 10:40 PM Congratulations on your win Kash. Very well written.

Carrie Richards January 4, 2012 at 1:29 PM This poem is bliss....a gift of a kiss. Well done, Kash!! The tenderness evoked in line after line! Congratulations!!

Natalie The Rogue Rhymer January 3, 2012 at 11:12 PM Wow Kash I thought you were WAY more conservative :) but I guess you've got a little badboy in you :) This is great! Many congrats. to you

Gwendolen Song December 24, 2011 at 3:54 AM Ding dang, Kash....this is HOT off the PRESS...very sensual write for Mrs. Karmaker. Frame it and place it next to your nightstand. I am fav'n it! Hope this is for David's very first contest....SMOKIN' HOT!! ...all of the lines are my favorite but molten wax of candle light is awesome! Gwendolen

Debbie Guzzi December 23, 2011 at 2:51 PM oh lala...I won't ask if it's your sweet wife...;) Light & Love Debi

Sara Kendrick December 22, 2011 at 5:53 PM Enjoyed reading your passionate work..Romanticly inspired...Thanks for stopping by...Sara

Nette Onclaud December 20, 2011 at 11:48 AM wow, a lyrical oiece that makes me swoon, kashi buddy.. get it on, get it on!

Barbara Gorelick December 19, 2011 at 6:53 PM A great twist on this theme..very well done. BG

Andrea Dietrich December 19, 2011 at 4:12 PM wow, you are on a roll now. I see how you did a gift about romance too. This is wonderful , Kash. I enjoyed both of your latest poems today! Let's see if third one is also charmed!

Carol Sunshine Brown December 19, 2011 at 12:30 PM Thank you so very much for your kind words on my poetry Kash. Love, Carol