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A Surprise Gift

A summer kiss on winter night precious gift enough to ignite my teenage mind with burning flame a neighbouring dame with sweet name a cage-free bird on its first flight. Many years ago but still bright in my mind like day's first sunlight and how I enjoyed when it came a summer kiss. Like molten wax of candle light lips melted as she held me tight passion's fire was hard to be tamed a surprise gift from that sweet dame taste of manhood on winter night a summer kiss. © kashinath karmakar (19th December 2011) ===============000================= Placement:7th (Dec.2011) Contest:Gifts Given,Gifts Received a Rondeau Sponsor:Cyndi Macmillan

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Date: 2/22/2012 7:23:00 PM
Kash...had to reread this one as it is such a rare treat! Smashingly awesome. Gwendolen
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Date: 1/9/2012 3:20:00 AM
Good Rondeau Kash. Congrats on your win.One Love~O.O.
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Date: 1/5/2012 4:39:00 PM
Congrats on your winning work..Sara
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Date: 1/5/2012 4:30:00 PM
Congratulations on your beautiful write Best regards, Jon
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Date: 1/5/2012 7:58:00 AM
Kash congrats on your win, well done..David
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Date: 1/5/2012 6:15:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in ~Cyndi's~ "Gifts Given--Received" contest Kash. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/4/2012 10:40:00 PM
Congratulations on your win Kash. Very well written.
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Date: 1/4/2012 1:29:00 PM
This poem is bliss....a gift of a kiss. Well done, Kash!! The tenderness evoked in line after line! Congratulations!!
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Date: 1/3/2012 11:12:00 PM
Wow Kash I thought you were WAY more conservative :) but I guess you've got a little badboy in you :) This is great! Many congrats. to you
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Date: 12/24/2011 3:54:00 AM
Ding dang, Kash....this is HOT off the PRESS...very sensual write for Mrs. Karmaker. Frame it and place it next to your nightstand. I am fav'n it! Hope this is for David's very first contest....SMOKIN' HOT!! ...all of the lines are my favorite but molten wax of candle light is awesome! Gwendolen
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Date: 12/23/2011 2:51:00 PM
oh lala...I won't ask if it's your sweet wife...;) Light & Love Debi
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Date: 12/22/2011 5:53:00 PM
Enjoyed reading your passionate work..Romanticly inspired...Thanks for stopping by...Sara
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Date: 12/20/2011 11:48:00 AM
wow, a lyrical oiece that makes me swoon, kashi buddy.. get it on, get it on!
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Date: 12/19/2011 6:53:00 PM
A great twist on this theme..very well done. BG
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Date: 12/19/2011 4:12:00 PM
wow, you are on a roll now. I see how you did a gift about romance too. This is wonderful , Kash. I enjoyed both of your latest poems today! Let's see if third one is also charmed!
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Date: 12/19/2011 12:30:00 PM
Thank you so very much for your kind words on my poetry Kash. Love, Carol
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