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A Sunset Sermon

In the crepuscular soothing sunset, bells tolled urging The aimless audience to attend the sermon of the new pastor. Despite their cynical sentiments, they dared not absent themselves. The look of habitual satisfaction on the pastor’s face was unmistakable. Outside light became penumbra, Still, men and women trudged towards the chapel, as the dirge-like bells faded into silence. His audience was silent too. He spoke in a sonorous voice, in an opulent resonant poetic vein an exuberant style which was to be his familiar characteristic: Unbridled jealousy is a sin, he intoned, so speak no evil, my friends.

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Date: 6/28/2023 11:50:00 AM
Very vivid imagery, and such a good message from the pastor, "Unbridled jealousy is a sin: so speak no evil..." awesome message. I love how you crafted this wonderful poem Victor!
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Date: 6/25/2023 12:43:00 PM
Very well crafted with depth of thought for this man's sermon.
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Date: 6/18/2023 5:46:00 AM
"Unbridled jealousy is a sin, he said, so speak no evil" ... and all went home in silence ... I think :) - Great written, my friend :) - hugs
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Date: 6/16/2023 8:19:00 AM
Lovely sermon, a serious message:) I just love how you too used 'crepuscular' in this, a really poetic word:)
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Date: 6/16/2023 5:06:00 AM
This poem is truly beautiful, with its vivid imagery. It reminds us to be mindful of the words we speak and to resist giving in to unchecked jealousy, which can be a harmful and sinful emotion.
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Date: 6/16/2023 2:41:00 AM
The new pastor got it right, we must think before we speak and never should disturb one’s peace. A delightful Sunset Sermon poem…. Belle
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Date: 6/15/2023 4:06:00 PM
we should roll our words around our tongue before spewing them Victor, lovely thoughts penned
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Date: 6/15/2023 2:38:00 PM
Clever and witty Victor almost humorous. Well done my good friend. Always a pleasure to read you are Victor thank you for sharing...
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Date: 6/15/2023 1:14:00 PM
This is the kind of guy needed to keep people awake in church. Great characterization of him and the congregation.
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Date: 6/15/2023 10:50:00 AM
Your memorable sunset sermon was much enjoyed, Victor. :)
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Date: 6/15/2023 9:44:00 AM
The pastor and his sermon are impressive, though his voice is sonorous ! I visulize him standing on the pulpit and giving the sermon.
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Date: 6/15/2023 9:15:00 AM
so, speak no evil. will get you life , great verse my friend
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Date: 6/15/2023 8:46:00 AM
Love this Victor. You never fail to to wrap me up in verse. Nicely done. God Bless, JB
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Date: 6/15/2023 7:07:00 AM
Graceful poem, Victor. A heavenly message in this sermon.
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Date: 6/15/2023 6:11:00 AM
Hello Victor. Oh my goodness. This entry has such an elegance surrounding it was a soft gentle quiet voice and tone. You did not stray from your lovely title. Thank you as always Victor for sharing your poetic and writing talent with us. Have a wonderful and peaceful afternoon. Love and Blessings now and always (smile smile smile)
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