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A Summer Place,

A garden in the hush of eventide, all work has stopped, the buds have closed in sleep. A summer place, we saunter side by side. Above, a crescent moon is set to peep shyly on our bliss, both satisfied and sad the day is ending glorified. Reluctantly we turn our steps aside towards the setting sun that dips below the trees that line the riverside with red-streaked colour statement. It must go, to stay away for hours, just to preside on other summer places we don’t know. We turn again, prepared to go inside as night must fall, the moon will still to abide. ©Vivienne Blake 2010

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 11/30/2015 11:58:00 AM
Vivienne, Enjoyed reading.... LUV **SKAT**
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Date: 3/23/2014 4:13:00 AM
I feel the calm, in your write.
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Date: 1/6/2013 6:19:00 AM
nice work
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Date: 1/5/2013 7:05:00 PM
lovely and romantic
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Date: 1/4/2013 2:03:00 AM
Welcome to P-Soup! Hope you'll have great pleasure in sharing your thoughts and poems with us. - You write very well, and I look forward to reading more from you - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 1/2/2013 1:22:00 AM
Sounds like a place I would like to be. Good write - JH
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Date: 1/1/2013 10:26:00 AM
Welcome to soup, a fine starting write on a difficult form. Light & Love
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Date: 1/1/2013 3:11:00 AM
Beautiful!
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