A Summer Place,

A garden in the hush of eventide,
all work has stopped, the buds have closed in sleep.
A summer place, we saunter side by side.

Above, a crescent moon is set to peep
shyly on our bliss, both satisfied
and sad the day is ending glorified.

Reluctantly we turn our steps aside
towards the setting sun that dips below
the trees that line the riverside

with red-streaked colour statement. It must go,
to stay away for hours, just to preside
on other summer places we don’t know.

We turn again, prepared to go inside
as night must fall, the moon will still to abide.



©Vivienne Blake 2010
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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November 30, 2015 at 11:58 AM
Vivienne, Enjoyed reading.... LUV **SKAT**
Berdoo Avatar
March 23, 2014 at 4:13 AM
I feel the calm, in your write.
Shines Avatar
January 6, 2013 at 6:19 AM
nice work
Anderson-Throop Avatar
January 5, 2013 at 7:05 PM
lovely and romantic
Andresen Avatar
January 4, 2013 at 2:03 AM
Welcome to P-Soup! Hope you'll have great pleasure in sharing your thoughts and poems with us. - You write very well, and I look forward to reading more from you - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
J.T. Avatar
January 2, 2013 at 1:22 AM
Sounds like a place I would like to be. Good write - JH
Guzzi Avatar
January 1, 2013 at 10:26 AM
Welcome to soup, a fine starting write on a difficult form. Light & Love
Palli Avatar
January 1, 2013 at 3:11 AM
Beautiful!
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