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A Summer Couplet

Moonflowers are night-blooming dwellers,
perfect for night owls and late night strollers.

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Richard Lamoureux

June 19, 2013 at 6:53 AM

I like it, well done

Connie Gildersleeve

June 19, 2013 at 2:42 PM

Thank you Richard for stopping by and leaving a lovely comment. Much appreciated. Warm Smiles, Connie

John Posey

June 17, 2013 at 7:15 PM

Well done, Connie... Good luck in the contest.... Jake

Connie Gildersleeve

June 18, 2013 at 3:37 PM

Thank you John for the visit and comment. Much appreciated. Warm Smiles, Connie

Harry Horsman

June 17, 2013 at 3:41 PM

extremely visual, beautiful poetry

Connie Gildersleeve

June 18, 2013 at 3:38 PM

Thank you Harry for your visit and comment. Much appreciated. Warm Smiles, Connie

Joseph May

June 16, 2013 at 8:03 AM

nicely penned Connie.....best wishes

Connie Gildersleeve

June 16, 2013 at 4:45 PM

Thank you Joseph. Warm Smiles, Connie

Russell Sivey

June 15, 2013 at 7:45 PM

I see you took in Robert's suggestion, this is a very nicely done write my friend! I really enjoyed reading this tremendous poem this evening! What a delightful and enlightening piece, Great Work!!

Connie Gildersleeve

June 16, 2013 at 4:50 PM

When it comes to rhyming words my mind goes completely blank. Thanks to Robert's suggestion I have a pretty good poem. Russell I hope you had a grand Father's Day and thank you for stopping in and leaving a delightful comment. Warm Smiles, Connie

Robert Pettit

June 15, 2013 at 5:57 PM

You have a good idea for a couplet by describing moonflowers. The one questionable item you have is your word "ambler". The verb "amble" is defined as "to walk slowly and casually".. I have never heard of flowers walking; so I don't believe "ambler" is an appropriate word here. Perhaps "dwellers" would fit in your couplet better.

Connie Gildersleeve

June 15, 2013 at 6:32 PM

Robert thank you for the suggestion. Much appreciated. You are absolutely right my friend. Warm Smiles, Connie