A Summer Breeze

I’m all alone now he is gone,
but there’s a star to wish upon.
And as I wish, I feel a breeze
that whispers through the verdent trees

I listen to its murmuring,
then close my eyes, imagining
that I’m that breeze. Oh, silver star,
transform me; let me travel far!

To travel where my love might be -
Star, will you grant this wish to me?
Please guide me that I’ll find my way
to where my love has gone to stay.

Chorus: 
A summer breeze, with tenderness
I’ll touch his face with my caress,
and while I’m lingering nearby,
he’ll hear the yearning in my sigh.

Yes, Star above me, hear my plea.
A summer breeze I long to be.
No star or moon with lovely glow.
I need to move; I need to flow.

His body and his precious face
I’ll wrap within my soothing grace.
The only man that I adore -
Star, let me touch him just once more.

A scent of jasmine I will bring.
Perhaps he’ll be remembering
perfume I wore when he was mine,
and love was simple yet divine.

Chorus: 
 A summer breeze, with tenderness
I’ll touch his face with my caress,
and while I’m lingering nearby,
he’ll hear the yearning in my sigh.

Repeat Chorus

Finale:
My touch, my scent, my lonesome sigh.
Oh, why did he ever have to say goodbye!

Aug. 10, 2018 for John Hamilton's 'Summer Breeze' Poetry Contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Marcum Wong Avatar
August 16, 2018 at 2:44 PM
I knew this was going to be a winner! Congratulations Andrea! : )
Sinha-Roy Avatar
August 13, 2018 at 3:54 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win, Andrea. Lovely lyric.
Pandit Avatar
August 12, 2018 at 8:54 PM
Congrats Andrea..enjoyed your lovely song. A great win.
May Avatar
August 12, 2018 at 7:22 PM
Dropping back with my Congrats
Ajmal Avatar
August 12, 2018 at 3:20 PM
Your this poem is absolutely beautiful and I absolutely love reading it, it is certainly going into my fav, many congratulations on your wonderful win in the contest, good luck and have a really nice day
Gondolf Avatar
August 12, 2018 at 1:55 PM
Andrea, congrats for this wonderful lyric. John
Hamilton Avatar
August 12, 2018 at 1:22 PM
Very nice lyric Andrea, one of your best for sure, congrats on a fine win!
Marcum Wong Avatar
August 11, 2018 at 10:39 PM
Wow Andrea, you did a super job on this lovely lyrical poem! I am sure it will be well received. : )
Messina Avatar
August 11, 2018 at 5:10 PM
Such a beautiful Lyric, Andrea! Great rhythm! Best of luck in the contest...Charlie :)
Cozart Avatar
August 11, 2018 at 10:24 AM
I really love this beautiful, rhythmic verse.
Sergi Avatar
August 11, 2018 at 9:19 AM
A beautiful breeze of love that flows with tenderness, Andrea
Cunningham Avatar
August 11, 2018 at 1:31 AM
A lovely lyric of a lost love , well written Andrea.
May Avatar
August 10, 2018 at 7:36 PM
You did a great job with this lyrical gem Andrea.. best wishes
Anish Avatar
August 10, 2018 at 6:17 PM
Reminds me of the tune "Summer Breeze" by Seals and Croft. Good luck in the contest. I am slowly recovering. Seems I will need an infusion soon. I have gone back to my apartment on the Lower East Side. Peace & Love Matthew Anish
Rose  Avatar
August 10, 2018 at 6:05 PM
No nicer thing to be then the breeze when we are trying to reach someone we love from across the miles and space. I see a winning poem and many a smile here Andrea. Thanks for sharing. Have a great evening.
Rodrigues Avatar
August 10, 2018 at 5:25 PM
Lovely flow and lyric! You become the breeze to remind him. GL in contest!
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