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A Summer Breeze

I’m all alone now he is gone, but there’s a star to wish upon. And as I wish, I feel a breeze that whispers through the verdent trees I listen to its murmuring, then close my eyes, imagining that I’m that breeze. Oh, silver star, transform me; let me travel far! To travel where my love might be - Star, will you grant this wish to me? Please guide me that I’ll find my way to where my love has gone to stay. Chorus: A summer breeze, with tenderness I’ll touch his face with my caress, and while I’m lingering nearby, he’ll hear the yearning in my sigh. Yes, Star above me, hear my plea. A summer breeze I long to be. No star or moon with lovely glow. I need to move; I need to flow. His body and his precious face I’ll wrap within my soothing grace. The only man that I adore - Star, let me touch him just once more. A scent of jasmine I will bring. Perhaps he’ll be remembering perfume I wore when he was mine, and love was simple yet divine. Chorus: A summer breeze, with tenderness I’ll touch his face with my caress, and while I’m lingering nearby, he’ll hear the yearning in my sigh. Repeat Chorus Finale: My touch, my scent, my lonesome sigh. Oh, why did he ever have to say goodbye! Aug. 10, 2018 for John Hamilton's 'Summer Breeze' Poetry Contest

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Date: 8/16/2018 2:44:00 PM
I knew this was going to be a winner! Congratulations Andrea! : )
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Date: 8/13/2018 3:54:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win, Andrea. Lovely lyric.
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Date: 8/12/2018 8:54:00 PM
Congrats Andrea..enjoyed your lovely song. A great win.
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Date: 8/12/2018 7:22:00 PM
Dropping back with my Congrats
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Date: 8/12/2018 3:20:00 PM
Your this poem is absolutely beautiful and I absolutely love reading it, it is certainly going into my fav, many congratulations on your wonderful win in the contest, good luck and have a really nice day
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Date: 8/12/2018 1:55:00 PM
Andrea, congrats for this wonderful lyric. John
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Date: 8/12/2018 1:22:00 PM
Very nice lyric Andrea, one of your best for sure, congrats on a fine win!
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Date: 8/11/2018 10:39:00 PM
Wow Andrea, you did a super job on this lovely lyrical poem! I am sure it will be well received. : )
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Date: 8/11/2018 5:10:00 PM
Such a beautiful Lyric, Andrea! Great rhythm! Best of luck in the contest...Charlie :)
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Date: 8/11/2018 10:24:00 AM
I really love this beautiful, rhythmic verse.
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Date: 8/11/2018 9:19:00 AM
A beautiful breeze of love that flows with tenderness, Andrea
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Date: 8/11/2018 1:31:00 AM
A lovely lyric of a lost love , well written Andrea.
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Date: 8/10/2018 7:36:00 PM
You did a great job with this lyrical gem Andrea.. best wishes
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Date: 8/10/2018 6:17:00 PM
Reminds me of the tune "Summer Breeze" by Seals and Croft. Good luck in the contest. I am slowly recovering. Seems I will need an infusion soon. I have gone back to my apartment on the Lower East Side. Peace & Love Matthew Anish
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Date: 8/10/2018 6:05:00 PM
No nicer thing to be then the breeze when we are trying to reach someone we love from across the miles and space. I see a winning poem and many a smile here Andrea. Thanks for sharing. Have a great evening.
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Date: 8/10/2018 5:25:00 PM
Lovely flow and lyric! You become the breeze to remind him. GL in contest!
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