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A Summary of A Fall

I suppose I did stretch it out fine - gossamer lines running from my mouth out of me in dribs n drabs in that sort of slow motion you see before you really see it coming.

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Daniel Henry Rodgers

Date: 11/8/2024 7:13:00 AM

Dear Kate, I came over to see if you posted any new poems and I saw this little gem. Ahh your words express the experience of slowly articulating thoughts or feelings, with the words emerging delicately and gradually. I felt it was almost like leaves falling in autumn or like watching paint dry. Loved It!! Autumn Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel

Kate Davies
Date: 11/8/2024 8:17:00 AM

Thank you Daniel! I haven't been on here much lately but still writing a lot but they have sort of visual elements and I can't get them to work just as I want them to be seen on here at the moment

Paige Hind

Date: 10/27/2024 4:53:00 PM

Woah I feel ready to slip under the rug- loved this poem

Kate Davies
Date: 10/27/2024 10:25:00 PM

Thank you Paige and for your other comments, it was truly a lovely thing to wake up to this morning <3