A Suicide

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White cross bone and a skull Poison's warning symbol For those who couldn't mull

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Robert Johnson

Date: 3/28/2017 12:22:00 PM

Powerfully hopeless. To cross the line of no return. May God's tender love comfort you if this is real in your life. Peace and Love.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 3/28/2017 1:33:00 PM

Yes, when a family member, friend or even an aquaintance commits suicide it leaves everyone in their wake wondering was there something that I could have done to have prevented that death from happening..Sara

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 1/15/2017 12:15:00 PM

- Effective symbol - Great written, Sara - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jack Horne

Date: 1/15/2017 9:34:00 AM

oh, another powerful one here & close to your heart, I know, my friend - think I understand how to write a tristich now & must try it sometime

Barry Stebbings

Date: 1/12/2017 4:23:00 PM

Mmmmm, interesting!

Sara Kendrick
Date: 1/13/2017 7:51:00 AM

Thanks for dropping by..Glad it got your interest..Sara