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Young and middle-aged ladies, who wear sundresses when summer days sizzle, make the opposite sex notice how lovely and sexy their soft skin is; curious guys, of course, can't help staring at them...not once but twice! Watch them chatting on a bench of a park, or just strolling down a busy street... pushing their baby's stroller in the July's heat; come closer to hear their silly talk! Jan, my niece's friend, attracts me like no lady ever can, she wears a colorful sundress she made herself, and she talks funny to make everybody laugh; some thinks she's crazy, but I'd love to be her man! Many women go to great lengths to get one of these... the one that makes them stand out and get winks from men who are easily distracted in the baseball's field: they wish their wives looked like that...more strength they'd yield! Fashion models draw admirable glances from an applauding crowd, but they wear sundresses for recognizition, not for their soulmates; so ordinary ladies wear them to find that ideal boyfriend or husband, and admit among yourselves that it is a style of attractiveness! Written by Andrew Crisci for Constance La France's contest, " The Sundress. "

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Date: 4/9/2011 6:00:00 AM
Congratulation's on your fine win Andrew in Constance's wonderful contest....:)
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Date: 4/4/2011 1:41:00 PM
I'm amazed at how well the men did with this sundress contest. Congratulaitons. Joyce
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Date: 4/4/2011 9:56:00 AM
Sundresses seem to affect men differently than they do women, Andrew. Quite a romantic perspective here. I'd love to see a picture of Jan in her sundress. Congratulations on your win in the contest! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 4/4/2011 7:40:00 AM
Wonderful write Andrew!Congrats on your win---kashinath
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Date: 4/4/2011 6:40:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Andrew in Constance La France's contest "The Sundress". Love, Carol
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Date: 4/3/2011 11:41:00 PM
CONGrats to you for this wonderful win, abdrew...:) huggs!
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Date: 4/3/2011 8:55:00 PM
Big Congratulations for this super write.
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Date: 4/3/2011 6:31:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Andrew-- you definitely make the sundress so appealing here, enjoyed how you wrote this one :)
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Date: 4/3/2011 6:16:00 PM
Congratulations on the sixth place win in the contest, Andrew
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Date: 4/3/2011 5:57:00 PM
Congrats Andrew on your winning poem in the sundress contest my friend.. an awesome write and delight to read..luv.. enjoy your grand victory with luv..
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Date: 4/3/2011 5:19:00 PM
A great job Andrew, congratulations on your sixth place. Agape, Moses
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Date: 3/24/2011 6:14:00 PM
Thank you for supporting my contest.
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Date: 3/24/2011 10:08:00 AM
I must tell you there have been so many diverse poems shared here at PoetrySoup yesterday and this morning that I am just now being able to read. Each one is a treasure to the poet who wrote it. It is a pleasure to me to be able to read them. I am so happy yours was among the ones I have read today Andrew and the best to you in the contest. Love, Carol
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