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A String of Thoughts

If all is of mind, then what are we doing? Physical life, is it worth pursuing? So discouraging, so immature, How can mere man, ever endure? The mind can think in such jubilations, Creative thoughts giving sensations. We rush to create, with no time to spare, No patience displayed; we do not dare. Take our time, uncertain as it seems, Let thoughts mature manifesting our dreams. For surely the timing is part of perfection, A thing in its time finds no rejection. Live in the moment, this time is just right, To be who you are, bring others to light. Each moment is filled with all that we need, Sometimes we’re a blossom, sometimes a seed. The joy is in sharing, however we can A smile, a hug, or a comforting hand Give unto others, you’ll surly receive God’s blessings of Love if you only believe.

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Date: 1/20/2022 4:57:00 PM
Wonderful advice here, Bill. Keep it coming
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Bill Baker
Date: 1/20/2022 5:20:00 PM
Every chance I get, Andrea. Just busy right now and wife's birthday tomorrow. Yeah! Have a great day! Hugs and blessings, Bill
Date: 1/20/2022 6:07:00 AM
Amazing poem with so many wise words of advice, Bill:) I absolutely love that final stanza:)
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Date: 1/20/2022 7:35:00 AM
Thank you, Jo. It is the most important part of the poem and life. Smiles ~ Blessings Bill
Date: 1/19/2022 5:33:00 PM
Remarkable final stanza, Bill. Poignant and oh-so-true. ~ gw
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Date: 1/19/2022 9:21:00 PM
Thank you, Gershon. Bill
Date: 1/19/2022 5:20:00 PM
"The joy is in sharing, however we can." Bill, this is a beautiful piece penned from the heart. I like every phrase. Great job
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Date: 1/19/2022 9:21:00 PM
Thank you, Lasaad, for your kind comments. Bill
Date: 1/19/2022 1:08:00 PM
Absolutely love this one Bill. You find happiness and peace in helping others. Good stuff. A fave for me. God Bless, JB
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Date: 1/19/2022 9:22:00 PM
Thank you, Judy, especially for the FAV. Have a great week, Bill
Date: 1/19/2022 10:42:00 AM
Hello Bill, a lovely string of thoughts. Believe in God, yes i do. Your poetess friend. Darlene
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 1/20/2022 10:48:00 AM
Hello Bill, you are welcome my poet friend. Hugs.
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Bill Baker
Date: 1/19/2022 12:47:00 PM
Thanks for the comment, Darlene. Hugs, Bill
Date: 1/19/2022 8:40:00 AM
Beautifully-written from your heart, Bill. I like each individual line, but particularly "The joy is in sharing, however we can."
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Bill Baker
Date: 1/19/2022 8:46:00 AM
Thank you, Milt. I can always depend on encouraging words from you, my friend. Have a great day! Bill

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