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A Straight Path

Stars stare at the silent candle, the fearless, stormy vast sky is embellished with the faint stars and a moonlight night. We always dig deep into the sky for a gray dawn. A fearful bloody dove nestles in the raging heavy storm. The brilliant red sun reflects off the rose petals, Claims untold, exceptional bliss. The wise sun waits agonizingly and murmurs things great. The life and choice are astray lifelong dreams, furious verses kneel to welcome the Muse . > 7th place in Brian Strand poetry contest.

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Date: 5/24/2023 5:24:00 AM
Congratulations on this winning work in Brian's contest. Way to go. Creative work for sure. Sara
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Mulu Magdalinos
Date: 5/24/2023 12:23:00 PM
Hello Sara,thank you Sara ,Congratulations on your winning work too . Very creative work. Kindest Regards!!
Date: 3/13/2023 11:17:00 AM
Hello Mulu,this is a beautiful day dream you had. It is so colorful. Enjoy your day my friend. Hugs.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 3/16/2023 8:15:00 AM
Hello Mulu, you are welcome. Hugs./Darlene/Your friend.
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Mulu Magdalinos
Date: 3/13/2023 8:42:00 PM
Hello Darlene, thank you ,for the lovely comment, my dear friend Be blessed!!

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