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A Storm Is Brewing


A storm is brewing, strong and proud,
     a dense and heavy somber view,
like smoke-filled billows that enshroud
     the splendor of earth's sky of blue.

With blankets of gray thunderheads
    A storm is brewing, strong and proud;
and as the thick of darkness spreads
     they roar their thunder clear and loud.

Neath sky of blue, the storm has plowed;
     its eerie colors deeper grow.
A storm is brewing, strong and proud
     as gusty winds begin to blow.

The deep, blue sky lies neath the quilt 
     of patchwork clouds of gray that shroud.
Now blacker still, its anger built;
     A storm is brewing, strong and proud.


April 17, 2016

~8th Place~
Premiere Contest: The Perfect Storm
Sponsor: Craig Cornish
Judged: 10/06/2017

~4th Place~
Contest: Hurricanes
Sponsor: Julie Rodeheaver 
Judged: 09/12/2017

~1st Place~
Contest: A Storm Is Brewing
Sponsor: Kelly Deschler
Judged: 05/15/201
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Watt Avatar
April 1, 2020 at 5:20 PM
Sandra, an excellent quatern with beautiful flow and rhyme choices, and so descriptive of the roiling clouds. Congrats on your #1 placement ~ John
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
April 1, 2020 at 4:30 PM
An eloquent flow and beautifully versed, Sandra, well-done indeed, worthy for 1st place, my grateful thanks for your participation, Aloha William
Medders Tobechi Avatar
October 7, 2017 at 9:08 AM
Congratulations on your win with this powerful quatern. The power of the storm is in the power of your words.
Barden Avatar
October 7, 2017 at 12:54 AM
Sandra - Congratulations on your well-deserved win with this wonderful write - blessings and keep up the great work, my friend! :-)
Hamilton Avatar
October 6, 2017 at 9:49 PM
Congrats Sandra on another fine win. with this excellent poem, I like the repeating refrain!
La France Avatar
October 6, 2017 at 6:52 PM
Sandra, a beautiful write, congratulations on your win and I love your image too !
Haight Avatar
October 6, 2017 at 7:52 PM
Thank you once again, Constance! Hugs, Sandra
Roper Avatar
September 13, 2017 at 8:30 PM
Sandra, congratulations on your win hugs Eve
Haight Avatar
October 6, 2017 at 7:52 PM
Thank you so much, Eve. Sandra
Sinha-Roy Avatar
September 13, 2017 at 12:03 AM
Congratulations, Sandra on your placement on nice depiction of hurricane.
Haight Avatar
October 6, 2017 at 7:51 PM
Thank you once again, Subimal, for your supportive comments. Sandra
Rodrigues Avatar
May 8, 2017 at 7:42 AM
So beautiful, Sandra! How lovely a storm. Congrats, Sandra!
Haight Avatar
May 8, 2017 at 6:48 PM
Thank you very much, Kim! Hugs, Sandra
Wolf Avatar
May 7, 2017 at 7:46 PM
An excellent write, Sandra! Congrats to you on your win
Haight Avatar
May 8, 2017 at 6:48 PM
Thank you again, White Wolf! Sandra
Kimathi Avatar
May 18, 2016 at 7:07 AM
Congrats Sandra, for your well, deserved top placement in the contest!! ;-)
Haight Avatar
May 8, 2017 at 6:47 PM
Thank you very much, Teddy, for your nice comment and congrats! Sandra
Canerdy Avatar
May 17, 2016 at 6:39 PM
A 7-plus, Sandra--skillfully-written powerful poem! Janice
Haight Avatar
May 17, 2016 at 6:45 PM
Thank you very much, Janice. I appreciate your nice comment and rating. Hugs, Sandra
Canerdy Avatar
May 17, 2016 at 6:38 PM
A 7-plus, Sandra--skillfully-written powerful poem! Janice
Canerdy Avatar
May 17, 2016 at 6:38 PM
A 7-plus, Sandra--skillfully-written powerful poem! Janice
Cheema Avatar
May 17, 2016 at 5:03 AM
Awesome Sandra! How beautifully you have rhymed your quatrains! Congrats!
Haight Avatar
May 17, 2016 at 6:46 PM
Thank you, Balveen. I appreciate your uplifting comment and congrats! Hugs, Sandra
May Avatar
May 16, 2016 at 10:32 PM
Congrats on your top win Sandra
Haight Avatar
May 17, 2016 at 6:48 PM
Thank you, Joseph. I appreciate your visit and congrats! Sandra
Roper Avatar
May 16, 2016 at 9:19 PM
Wonderful write,Sandra, Congratulation on your win! Hugs Eve
Haight Avatar
May 17, 2016 at 6:48 PM
Thank you so much, Eve, for your nice comment and congrats. Hugs, Sandra
Carmack Avatar
May 16, 2016 at 9:05 PM
Sandra, congrats on your win. Well deserved 1st place.
Haight Avatar
May 17, 2016 at 6:49 PM
Thank you very much, Rob. So nice of you to stop with with your congratulations. Sandra
Chansarkar Avatar
May 16, 2016 at 10:23 AM
Just so "wow" Sandra,congratulations!
Haight Avatar
May 17, 2016 at 6:50 PM
Thank you, Sara. I appreciate your stopping by with your nice comment and congrats. Hugs, Sandra
Rv Avatar
May 16, 2016 at 1:38 AM
Congratulations on your wonderful win, dear Sandra!! Very glad this won!! :) :)
Haight Avatar
May 17, 2016 at 6:51 PM
Thank you, Sneha, for your uplifting comment and congratulations. Hugs, Sandra
Smith Avatar
May 15, 2016 at 10:58 PM
Congrats Sandra another great win...
Haight Avatar
May 17, 2016 at 6:52 PM
Thank you very much, Charlie. Sandra
Negron Flores Avatar
May 15, 2016 at 10:36 PM
Congratulations Sandra on the placement of the contest
Haight Avatar
May 17, 2016 at 6:52 PM
Thank you so much, Nayda. Hugs, Sandra
Marcum Wong Avatar
May 15, 2016 at 10:13 PM
A wonderful win for you Sandra, with this worthy entry! Big congrats to you my friend! # 7 ; )
Haight Avatar
May 17, 2016 at 6:53 PM
Hi, Connie, thank you so much for stopping by with your nice comment, congrats and rating. Much appreciated! Hugs, Sandra
Deschler Avatar
May 15, 2016 at 8:52 PM
An excellent poem, Sandra. I liked your use of repetition here, almost mimicking the way a storm seems to come and dissipate in waves... Congratulations on a first place win!
Haight Avatar
May 15, 2016 at 9:16 PM
Thank you so much, Kelly. I enjoyed writing for your contest, and I really appreciate my fine placement. Thanks again! Hugs, Sandra
Rv Avatar
April 18, 2016 at 9:01 AM
This is magnificent!! Hope it does very well in the contest!! :) :)
Haight Avatar
April 18, 2016 at 3:32 PM
Thank you so much, Sneha! I appreciate your visit and uplifting comments. Hugs, Sandra
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