A Storm Is Brewing

A storm is brewing,
and a long night begins.
Dark clouds fill the horizon,
thunder shakes the sky.
Soon the night will cry,
and wind will rush through an open window,
raising curtains in a spiral lift.
Lightning flashes,
the room fills with dancing shadows.
A silhouette sits at a piano,
playing a sad sonata.
One two three,
one two three,
one two three.
The storm reflects the emotion,
fingers move across the ivory keys of sorrow,
trying to forget.
Loneliness the master of ceremony,
lightning the only audience,
thunder the only applause,
and the night cries.

contest A Storm is Brewing
4/16/16
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Marcum Wong Avatar
May 17, 2016 at 3:59 PM
I love the melancholic emotions your entry evokes Frederic. Superb dramatic images! Congratulations on your placement! I loved this. #7. ; )
Carmack Avatar
May 16, 2016 at 9:09 PM
Frederic, this is my favorite from the winner's list. "A silhouette sits at a piano, playing a sad sonata." & "fingers move across the ivory keys of sorrow,trying to forget. Loneliness ..." My favorite lines. Congrats to you on your placement.
Lawless Avatar
May 16, 2016 at 3:47 PM
Frederic, I think this should have placed higher....but that's just my humble opinion. Nicely done, the short and long lines accentuate the rhythm of the storm as the line breaks drive home the sadness of an empty night.
Negron Flores Avatar
May 15, 2016 at 10:50 PM
Congratulations Frederic on the placement of the contest
Deschler Avatar
May 15, 2016 at 10:10 PM
I really liked this darker take on the contest theme... Beautifully written and emotionally moving. Congrats on a win, Frederic!
Dietrich Avatar
April 17, 2016 at 7:19 PM
oh I love how you put the sonata with the brewing storm. Wonderful. I can't believe this is filling up so fast. DANG. how can I ever get one done in time???
Onclaud Avatar
April 17, 2016 at 4:45 PM
really vivid and expressive, frederick.. i like how you ended this!..huggs
Lawless Avatar
April 16, 2016 at 10:56 PM
Frederic, I like the way this one developed. well done.
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