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a spring monoku

where spring goes, seedlings grow; fresh breezes blow; streams from melted snow now flow

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Dennis Spilchuk

Date: 6/15/2025 8:38:00 AM

An inspiring monoku you have written. Wonderful to read.

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 5/29/2025 9:41:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your wonderful "a spring monoku" write. Have a blessed day with your win................

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 5/26/2025 12:14:00 PM

And a lovely flow! Congrats!

Line Gauthier

Date: 5/26/2025 9:58:00 AM

Delightful monoku, Andrea ~

Malabika Ray Choudhury

Date: 5/26/2025 6:21:00 AM

Congratulations on your top win, Andrea! Your creativity and wonderful ideas never cease to amaze me!

Valsa George

Date: 5/26/2025 6:14:00 AM

Lovely monoku, celebrating spring! Congratulations dear Andrea on your first place win.

Maclawrence Famuyiwa

Date: 5/26/2025 5:55:00 AM

As usual top quality. Congrats.

Vanya Evangeline

Date: 5/26/2025 5:46:00 AM

Ooh, I really love the sensory elements here. Very cool. Lovely rhymes too. Congrats!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 5/26/2025 2:41:00 AM

- The beauty of spring, thank you for this beautiful picture, Andrea :) - Congratulations on your win in the contest :) - hugs

Nette Onclaud

Date: 5/25/2025 10:55:00 PM

how creative , andrea...spring glows, rows, flows! huge congrats on your 1st first win! how are y9u doing?

Howard Kerr

Date: 5/25/2025 10:11:00 PM

Congratulations Andrea, On your triumph with this stunning entry. I love its silken stepwise elegance. Salient spring features captured. Howard

Oliver Mckeithan

Date: 5/25/2025 8:55:00 PM

Congrats on your well deserved placement in the contest. Even in a monoku you make it rhyme well.

Daniel Henry Rodgers

Date: 5/12/2025 7:02:00 AM

Dear Andrea, First of all let me just say that all your rhymes in your monoku brought spring into this morning for me. Spring Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel

Ink Empress

Date: 5/12/2025 1:00:00 AM

I love the internal rhymes especially at the end of your beautiful monoku! How stunning and well woven this is dear andrea! Your words truly are soul warming and fitting for the prompt for sure! Best wishes! Sending you light always

Akham Nilabirdhwaja Singh

Date: 5/12/2025 12:54:00 AM

A vivid and beautiful depiction of spring.Best wishes .

Nette Onclaud

Date: 5/11/2025 4:18:00 PM

like spring, this write is' lithesomely' clean and smooth without the many added verbose words wc amount to.nothing. very nice, andie!

CayCay Jennings

Date: 5/11/2025 4:06:00 PM

You rhymed your Monoku. Very pretty and the rhymes made it perky, as well. Your write is a delight! (I'm hiding in my room at 7:15pm) Love ya ... CayCay

Paige Hind

Date: 5/11/2025 11:59:00 AM

Beautiful Monoku, Andrea. The rhyming worked well and added to it. <3

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 5/11/2025 11:05:00 AM

- Spring brings so many joys, Andrea ... lovely - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs