a spring monoku

where spring goes, seedlings grow; fresh breezes blow; streams from melted snow now flow

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Daniel Henry Rodgers

Date: 5/12/2025 7:02:00 AM

Dear Andrea, First of all let me just say that all your rhymes in your monoku brought spring into this morning for me. Spring Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel

Ink Empress

Date: 5/12/2025 1:00:00 AM

I love the internal rhymes especially at the end of your beautiful monoku! How stunning and well woven this is dear andrea! Your words truly are soul warming and fitting for the prompt for sure! Best wishes! Sending you light always

Akham Nilabirdhwaja Singh

Date: 5/12/2025 12:54:00 AM

A vivid and beautiful depiction of spring.Best wishes .

Nette Onclaud

Date: 5/11/2025 4:18:00 PM

like spring, this write is' lithesomely' clean and smooth without the many added verbose words wc amount to.nothing. very nice, andie!

CayCay Jennings

Date: 5/11/2025 4:06:00 PM

You rhymed your Monoku. Very pretty and the rhymes made it perky, as well. Your write is a delight! (I'm hiding in my room at 7:15pm) Love ya ... CayCay

Paige Hind

Date: 5/11/2025 11:59:00 AM

Beautiful Monoku, Andrea. The rhyming worked well and added to it. <3

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 5/11/2025 11:05:00 AM

- Spring brings so many joys, Andrea ... lovely - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs