A Splendid Spring Fall Day

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Ah, the air - so sweet!
Early Spring essences ...
Pine cones, lilacs and cherry blossoms,
With a wispy and not unpleasant hint of wood smoke,

A waft of campfires being carried up the valley,
Mixing with a light moisture from Bridal Veil Falls ...
On such a magnificent day!
Not much wind, per se,

But a gentle breeze nonetheless,
Created by the natural cone of the valley ...
A warm mistral sent north to mix with cooler air.
Gloriously clear and deep sky ...

No timid hues on such a morn,
But rather a deep Nanking Blue,
Making a statement to the sun,
(Still emerging from behind an evergreen horizon),

That it shall not take advantage on such a day!
This was a free-climb unlike any other -
The Salathe of El Capitan ...
A dream come true, and one to cherish, aye!

And now, finally, a positive legacy to leave my children!
Oh, it makes no matter that I didn't finish -
(That a piton lost its stead purchase of the rock),
It is the process that truly counts -

The courage required to have made the first four pitches,
That is something few ever realize!
That is what shall be remembered and talked of with regard!
I am as satisfied as a human can be,

And on a morning as glorious as they come!
A man could do far worse ... FAR worse!
Blessed, am I, to know such a remarkable day,
Immersed in the splendid colors and aromas and sounds of nature,

The sandy gray tones of the rock face sliding by,
The wind whistling a fond farewell in my ears,
And the immaculate crystal heavens dropping away ...
As I soar downward ...

To my end.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017



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Date: 10/16/2017 8:52:00 AM
Your write was so pleasant and peaceful that it is unfortunate that he has fallen to his end, but it is good that he got to enjoy the wonderful tranquility before his demise! I surely enjoyed reading your incredible poem here this morning, you are an awesome writer my friend! Such a tremendous piece! Great Work!!
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 10/16/2017 2:02:00 PM
Thank you so much, my good friend - I'm so pleased you enjoyed it! This poem is not so much about tragedy as it is about a man's conscious choice to end his life in a state of peace and appreciation, instead of fear and terror ... the length of the fall, (from such a height), affords him that opportunity. Blessings, Buddy! :-)
Date: 10/16/2017 6:35:00 AM
Bright and light and dark and deep, finely penned my friend. xomo
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 10/16/2017 2:04:00 PM
Thank you, my friend - this was a bit "different", but I wanted to show a person's decision to end their life in a positive state-of-mind, rather than terror and fear ... he knows he's done for, but chooses to embrace it. Blessings, Mo! <3
Date: 10/15/2017 9:41:00 PM
Ya gotta have the twist there eh Greg...just when I was enjoying the scenery the plot thickens and ends with a thud ouch...very entertaining I wasn't expecting that one! You are one of a kind dear poet enjoyed the read.
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 10/16/2017 2:06:00 PM
Thank you so much, Brother, I greatly appreciate the kindness ... so pleased you enjoyed it, John! :-)
Date: 10/15/2017 8:46:00 PM
I love all your imagery. Wonderfully crafted poem. Flows like honey.
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 10/16/2017 2:07:00 PM
Thank you so much, Line ... this was primarily a study in embracing death, rather than being terrified by it. So glad you enjoyed it, my friend! :-)
Date: 10/15/2017 7:46:00 PM
You depicted the glory of spring with a twist in the end, which to me, could be the closing of this season...ohh, so fine, greg..huggs
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 10/16/2017 2:09:00 PM
That's very kind of you, Nette - I'm very happy that you liked this one! I was hoping people would understand that this wasn't about tragedy, but rather a man embracing death in a state of peace ... I'm pleased you got that message! Blessings, my friend! :-) <3
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