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A Splash of Class

The gorgeous, willowy, young brunette glides confidently across the floor like a swan over water. Her bright yellow spike heels are perfect with her (I suspect) $1,500 Jovani gown. Her hair is extravagantly coiffed; her lovely hands, bejeweled. From my booth, I watch her sashay away from the counter with her Big Mac and large fries. I think of how my old high-school friend-- prom queen, Most Beautiful, Most Likely to Succeed, Most Stylish . . . knows how to introduce a splash of class to the most mundane settings. She smiles at me brilliantly and pats my hand with her perfectly manicured fingers before she floats away. I hope she won’t get any grease or ketchup on that gorgeous gown! She has only two napkins. I shake my head sympathetically, thinking of how her poor feet will throb later tonight when she arrives home from McDonald’s and removes those heels!
Date: June 1, 2020 Contest Title: Splash Sponsor: Kai Michael Neumann

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Date: 6/2/2020 4:56:00 PM
well, that's class down the drain, janice... creatively done!...huggs
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 6/2/2020 5:03:00 PM
Thank you so much, Nette! Janice
Date: 6/1/2020 7:51:00 PM
what an awesome character study this was. In a flash we can see her splash of class!!
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 6/1/2020 9:05:00 PM
Thanks so much, Andrea! Janice
Date: 6/1/2020 6:19:00 PM
I don't even know what 'Splash' is supposed to denote --- but I do know that a classy gown and spiked heels in a McDonalds strikes me like that Paris Hilton TV show a while back where she was in overalls or something... 'Green Acres' comes to mind as well. Maybe 'Splash' connotes 'Jarring?' ~ Ignorant of all that is Fashionable
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 6/1/2020 6:23:00 PM
Thanks, Gershon. Janice
Date: 6/1/2020 5:30:00 PM
Certainly a splash ...you gave her style and class Janice..she is one of a kind going to McDonald's in $1,500 gown for a Big Mac. I see her flash by in your words. Splendid write.
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 6/1/2020 5:57:00 PM
Thanks so much, Vijay! :-) Janice

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