A Spark

I reach for you in darkness, hoping to feel you nearby I look for you in the sparkling stars in the sky I wrap my wishes securely, without a word told But, images are created as thoughts are scrolled In my mind where dreams come alive with a spark I am no longer invisible or lost in the dark Your gentle ways are a special gift to be found I am gratefully enlightened when you are around Heidi Sands 8/16/20

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Gershon Wolf

Date: 8/17/2020 8:32:00 PM

The intimacy of your writes always resonates with me. Very impressive, Heidi. Here's to sparks, divine and human. Light and Love, Gershon

Heidi Sands
Date: 8/18/2020 5:32:00 AM

That is nice to hear Gershon. Thank you. Light and Love :)

Harry Horsman

Date: 8/17/2020 8:25:00 PM

LOve the positivity here Heidi, in this warm and comforting poem.

Heidi Sands
Date: 8/18/2020 5:31:00 AM

Hi Harry. I am happy to hear that. Thank you :)

Eve Roper

Date: 8/17/2020 3:52:00 PM

Lovely, Heidi, the warm loving emotions.

Heidi Sands
Date: 8/17/2020 4:45:00 PM

Thank you Eve. Have a nice evening :)

Sandra L. Weiss

Date: 8/17/2020 9:15:00 AM

This is nice Heidi. It has a gentleness about it.

Heidi Sands
Date: 8/17/2020 9:20:00 AM

Thank you very much Sandy. I appreciate your comments always :)

John Hamilton

Date: 8/16/2020 3:41:00 PM

Very nice write Heidi, has a comforting feel to it, a pleasure to read today!

Heidi Sands
Date: 8/16/2020 6:48:00 PM

Nice to hear. Thank you John :)

Paul Callus

Date: 8/16/2020 2:48:00 PM

That spark certainly shows in these lovely lines, Heidi! having a loved one around, even if just in thought, helps to put a spring in your step:) Warm regards // paul

Heidi Sands
Date: 8/16/2020 3:02:00 PM

Thank you Paul. So true. I appreciate your comment. Take care :)

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 8/16/2020 12:33:00 PM

There is a wonderful sense of security when your loved one lies in bed next to you, Heidi. You capture this feeling perfectly in your poem! Hugs, Carolyn

Heidi Sands
Date: 8/16/2020 12:52:00 PM

Thank you Carolyn. I hope your weekend is going well :)

Vijay Pandit

Date: 8/16/2020 8:27:00 AM

Enjoyed the happy tone of your poem Heidi--a joy to read.

Heidi Sands
Date: 8/16/2020 8:35:00 AM

Thank you Vijay. I am happy to hear that today. I hope all is well. :)