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A Song of Summertime

I sing a song of lilacs’ scent at dawn; of butterflies that flit on zephyr’s breeze and peonies that dance upon my lawn; of golden fields, hills, rills, and leafy trees which offer shade on a sweltering day; of blue jays and of kids whose cares are flung - while splashing water – as in pools they play; of moonlight kisses when romance is young; of chasing waves and strolling hand in hand, then gazing at a crimson sky as sun descends and night arrives to cool the land; of stars that bloom before new day’s begun; of cauliflower clouds in azure blue. I sing a song of summertime to you.

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Date: 12/12/2023 6:20:00 AM
“ of cauliflower clouds in azure blue. I sing a song of summertime to you.” wow cauliflower clouds thats creative and a line that would stay in my mind for a very long time. Dear andrea you paint imagery in such a vivid manner: excellent flow of rhymes in your sonnet. Pleasure reading this. Congratulations on your win in brians contest
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Date: 7/30/2023 11:56:00 PM
What a beautiful sonnet! Congratulations!
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Date: 7/30/2023 4:04:00 AM
A beauty ..this creation ... cauliflower clouds...aha
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Date: 7/30/2023 1:54:00 AM
This is such a beautiful poem. I so love it! Thank you so much for sharing it and congrats on a top win. Love to you and God bless you too, Gina
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Date: 7/27/2023 10:16:00 PM
Oh, Andrea, this sonnet is like joy on summer joy on springs, the last day of school before summer vacation and a triple ice cream cone!!!! You have captured summer delight in images, like cauliflower clouds, that all of us have experienced - treasures of summer! Blessings and best wishes for the contest!
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Date: 7/26/2023 5:28:00 PM
"... when romance is young" ~ ( and the purpose of the night ) " . . . to cool the land" and forever hereafter spoiled when my clouds don't take the shape of cauliflower. A seemingly effortless integrity but I think that's just the sign of a masterwork. You should write more of these!
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Date: 7/17/2023 12:39:00 PM
Just beautiful, Andrea! Bravo!
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Date: 7/17/2023 4:50:00 AM
Beautiful song, Andrea--superb summer images throughout.
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Date: 7/16/2023 5:27:00 PM
An excellent summer sonnet, Andrea! The imagery in this lovely write is so vivid! Blessings, Kim M
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