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A Song Is Born

Touching me deep in my core; strings vibrating,fingers sore. Long into the night I strive to figure out the jumping jive. Won't stop strumming till I find that tune implanted in my mind. The logical and lyrical combine into a miracle. Crescendo lifts into the sky; a band of angels standing by. Playing now with all my might this song is born into the night. I'm gratified with every note and every lilting word I wrote. I hope you will remember this; That music-making is my bliss! for "Limitless" contest sponsored by Paula Swanson

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Date: 5/16/2011 12:16:00 PM
Congratulations on your win Deb. Love,Carol
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Date: 5/13/2011 11:54:00 AM
Congratulations on your win.Great topic..Sara
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Date: 5/11/2011 1:41:00 PM
Sorry I meant Deb, in Paula's contest..
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Date: 5/11/2011 1:38:00 PM
Congrats Paula!!! well done my dear!!!
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Date: 5/10/2011 7:40:00 AM
Lovely songs are limitless, Deb!!! Congratulations on a well deserved win!! ~ Carrie
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Date: 5/10/2011 5:49:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Deb in Paula's contest. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/10/2011 5:31:00 AM
A transcendant joy! Congrad's Light & Love
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Date: 5/10/2011 5:19:00 AM
Congratuations on the second place win in the contest, Deb
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Date: 5/10/2011 12:55:00 AM
a poem so full of interest and musical phrases, deb!…. my special kudos to you for the high win! :) huggs!
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Date: 5/9/2011 11:52:00 PM
Very nice write. Congrats.
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Date: 5/9/2011 11:06:00 PM
Dear Deb. Your music writing ability is endless when the right side of your brain is so utilized as yours is! Congrats on a very worthy win in this tricky contest. I could not come up with a thing. Blessings. Gwendolen
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Date: 5/9/2011 10:04:00 PM
Deb, this is so well deserved!! So you are a musician as well as a fine poet?? Congratulations. I liked this just as much the second time I saw it!
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Date: 5/9/2011 9:55:00 PM
Great 2nd place win! You have a love for music. A fabulous win x
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Date: 5/9/2011 8:03:00 PM
Congrats Deb on your big win in the Limitless contest with this fantastic entry luv..
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Date: 5/6/2011 1:51:00 PM
I love how you did it for music.It's just like a melody too. Good luck in the contest,Deb.
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Date: 5/6/2011 12:45:00 PM
It was a pleasure to read your poetry today Deb. Have a wonderful weekend filled with good health, love, and inspiration to continue your poetry. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/6/2011 10:49:00 AM
A good write. Music is my great love (even more than poetry)...I play guitar and sing. Regards, Robert.
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Date: 5/6/2011 6:20:00 AM
Hello there dear poet ! Deb, this write reminds me so much of my 27 yr old son who was this write to the 'T'...of course now, it's like second nature, him writing music and lyrics. Have a great weekend...much love, james
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