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A Smile Sparkling Chemistry

A SMILE SPARKLING CHEMISTRY

Smiles in sync:         

                he waves his hand     
                                      
                               she welcomes him       
                                                      
                                           positive chemistry! 
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CONTEST NAME: Micropoetry ain't that tweet
Contest Sponsor: Casarah Nance
~~2nd Place~~

Olive Eloisa Guillermo
10:16 pm, August 02, 2015
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Anish Avatar
August 15, 2015 at 11:16 PM
This is nice upbeat work! Peace & Love Matthew Anish
Gupta Avatar
August 11, 2015 at 5:42 AM
An ocean in a drop of water As you and I smile together.
Dietrich Avatar
August 7, 2015 at 9:19 PM
big Congrats on your awesome win, Olive.
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
February 1, 2016 at 3:39 AM
Thanks much Andie.. =`)
Kendrick Avatar
August 7, 2015 at 12:18 PM
((())):>)CONGRATS!!SK
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
November 16, 2015 at 2:03 AM
thanks much.. =`)~
Lamoureux Avatar
August 7, 2015 at 7:58 AM
Congratulations, this is a lovely piece.
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
October 14, 2015 at 5:17 AM
thank you Richard.. =`)
Inman Avatar
August 7, 2015 at 7:02 AM
Beautifully written. Nothing like a beautiful smile.
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
October 13, 2015 at 10:37 PM
thanks much JAmes Inman.. =`)
Allison Avatar
August 7, 2015 at 4:25 AM
Dropping back with my congratulations Olive:-) hugs Jan xx
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
September 23, 2015 at 8:15 AM
thanks much JAn.. =`)
Wigley Avatar
August 7, 2015 at 12:39 AM
Congratulations,Olive, on a winningly good write. Viv x
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
September 17, 2015 at 9:30 PM
Thank you so much Viv.. =`)
Sietesantos Avatar
August 7, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Congratulations on your great win, Olive! Very clever write that I enjoyed reading! It's all about Puppy Love! Pandita
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
September 17, 2015 at 9:28 PM
Thank you so much Pandita. Kudos also!
Y. Avatar
August 6, 2015 at 11:59 PM
Olive, congrats on your win:-) Alexis
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
September 16, 2015 at 7:36 AM
thank you so much Alexis.. =`)
A. Sharma Avatar
August 6, 2015 at 11:57 PM
Ah truly precise n cute Olive! Congrats on big win!
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
September 3, 2015 at 5:10 AM
thank you so much Dr. Upma.. =')
Nance Avatar
August 6, 2015 at 8:01 PM
This is so tweet, sweet, electrifying, nicely done, and grats second place :)!
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
August 27, 2015 at 10:14 PM
thanks much Cassie.. =')~
Nunez Avatar
August 5, 2015 at 2:37 PM
Love is def in the air! Cute write, Olive! hugs!
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
August 27, 2015 at 10:12 PM
It is Kim! thanks much hugs! :D
Boddie Avatar
August 4, 2015 at 4:45 PM
that was sheer satisfaction....and check out this chemical reaction....and not with arches of the backs and....just with the union of our pens, literary climaxing....;)
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
August 17, 2015 at 9:08 PM
thanks much Eric.. =")
Dietrich Avatar
August 4, 2015 at 8:33 AM
Seeing your note to me below here. Yeah, lack of time is always a woe of MINE.
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
August 17, 2015 at 9:06 PM
same with me Andie.. hugs!
Callus Avatar
August 3, 2015 at 4:17 PM
That's positive chemistry, sure enough! A smile works wonders. :))) Hugs // paul
Anish Avatar
August 3, 2015 at 8:46 AM
A Happy poem! Like the photos you chose! Peace 7 Love Matthew Anish
Jones Avatar
August 3, 2015 at 8:00 AM
One instinctively knows when something is right. There is nothing like the electrical connection between two spirits simpatico. Embrazos y besos. Kind regards, Ian
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
August 6, 2015 at 4:59 AM
Yes that charged anions within us.. I've experienced this.. not only being connected with the opposite sex but also when gaining friends..=') thanks much~Olive Eloisa =')
Ryerson Avatar
August 3, 2015 at 5:34 AM
Ah yes Olive, love at first sight as they say? 'Smiles in sync:' Yes indeed! Thank you for this - Tim
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
August 5, 2015 at 9:32 AM
you nailed it tim.. =')! thanks too!
Muideen Avatar
August 3, 2015 at 3:05 AM
I love your wonderful write,and the picture you posted with it, intriguing write.........A.M.
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
August 5, 2015 at 12:56 AM
thanks much Afolabi.. =') I appreciate you stopping by.. =')~
Fraser Avatar
August 2, 2015 at 12:16 PM
Smiles in sync, eyes wink, hugs little one, your Huge One//Jamesxxx
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
August 4, 2015 at 1:25 AM
Thanks much James.. =') I don't usually wear make-up.. I am not fond of it.. =') hence i always wear my smile... =')!hugs back~Olive Eloisa
Dietrich Avatar
August 2, 2015 at 10:54 AM
and a very positive poem, sweetie!! hey, you commented on trying the bell contest. I think it closed right after I entered it. Sorry if you did not get into it.
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
August 3, 2015 at 3:49 AM
yes Andie, it's good that I look at the contest page first before I start polishing my entry.. wahhh! lack of time!! thanks much! hugs!
Onclaud Avatar
August 2, 2015 at 10:33 AM
totally charmed by this, eloi.. soo kilig... very sweet write.. huggs
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
August 3, 2015 at 3:43 AM
hugs back!!! thanks Nette.. will see you soon!!~Olive Eloisa
Allison Avatar
August 2, 2015 at 9:40 AM
oh how romantic Olive:-) hugs jan xx
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
August 3, 2015 at 3:42 AM
thank you so much Jan.. =') weee though am not so sure with the words I choose to be honest.. =')!hehehe
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