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A Slow Storm

A Slow Storm Ash gray clouds rest above the large white home. All those within have sweaty palms and feet. A slight wind blew when they stepped out to roam, and now they must take care in what they tweet. A slow storm is in play beneath the nails of this historic, antiquated sight. Solid search of memos and emails, to reveal if it’s wrong or if it’s right. The thunder rolls in heavy baritone, reverberations rattling the front door, a slow storm, brews in dark undertones, like the one that took place in seventy-four. All is lost for one man's want of a wall. We know what ''goeth'' before there's a fall. 7/18/17

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Date: 8/18/2017 2:52:00 AM
Back to congratulate you on your win ~*
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Date: 7/20/2017 10:47:00 PM
Fascinating write, Janis, I love the imagery . Good luck in the contest... ~*
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Janis Thompson
Date: 7/21/2017 11:24:00 AM
Thanks so much for everything Eve. Blessings, Janis.
Date: 7/19/2017 1:55:00 PM
You just unzipped the covers of my mind to the unprecedented worship of your adorable lines with a powerful choice of words that can't just be ignored. Showers of your wisdom is well palpated in this page and the only thing I can say is a big WELL DONE! Can't wait to have more of your mental command flowing through my reading mind.
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Janis Thompson
Date: 7/21/2017 11:27:00 AM
I appreciate your stamp of approval. Blessings, Janis.
Date: 7/19/2017 9:00:00 AM
You have such a pretty bit mark, Janis:) How cool is this? I love it!
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Janis Thompson
Date: 7/21/2017 11:28:00 AM
Thanks friend. Blessings, Janis.
Date: 7/18/2017 5:00:00 PM
Love it Janis...reminds me of a great satirist Jeremiah Trent
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Janis Thompson
Date: 7/21/2017 11:30:00 AM
I appreciate your stamp of approval. Blessings, Janis.
Date: 7/18/2017 4:48:00 PM
this one cracked me up...but unlike Humpty I shall persevere and carry on.
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Janis Thompson
Date: 7/21/2017 11:23:00 AM
Famous last words.
Date: 7/18/2017 4:40:00 PM
Lovely. You didn't have to tell me this was satire. In fact it's really astute commentary. The folks in DC have really lost control, haven't they? I guess what's nicest about being in SoCal is we're three thousand miles away from all this nonsense.
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Janis Thompson
Date: 7/21/2017 11:31:00 AM
They are losing control more and more each day. We will see, many things.

Book: Shattered Sighs