A Single Daffodil

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There among the petals of my past as miniature wings buzz, 
bouncing here and there, my mind follows their wayward path,  
becoming lost within the patterns meandering, recalling those 
moments when we imagined this oasis, out beyond the arbor 
where our love bloomed as daffodils on a warm spring day,
when beauty was destined to the eye of the beholder as
it was to our little friend upon finding a perfect rose

Now as I peer past the fractured lattice, where weeds of all 
shapes and sizes have gathered, my eyes become moist when 
a pest bumbles towards my face and I swat it down. 
As I watch it wriggle in the overgrown grass, yellow 
and black bands desperately trying to reclaim its journey,
I see that day when winter set about your frail frame 
and you wilted before my eyes

Picking up a stick I gently lift the insect from the grass
and watch it happily fly away, tiny wings on a chilly spring day, 
glistening through the clouds that wrap this place in your absence
and I wonder if your wings are fluttering as I think about 
you. When I notice a single daffodil blooming among the 
bramble and thicket, a soft yellow reply fluttering in the breeze 
and I gaze up to the heavens and smile



9/4/19
Written for: Where Bumbles Bounce Poetry Contest
Sponsored by:  Craig Cornish

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019



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Date: 10/4/2019 7:55:00 AM
A most lovely and touching poem, Chris! I promise never again to pick daffodils, my friend. Congratulations on your merited win. // paul
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Chris Green
Date: 10/4/2019 8:00:00 AM
Thanks so very much Paul. You can pick one if you want to. :) I appreciate you my friend.
Date: 10/3/2019 4:47:00 PM
Chris congratulations on your win in the contest with this wonderful write!
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Chris Green
Date: 10/3/2019 4:56:00 PM
Thank you so much for your kind words.
Date: 10/3/2019 4:44:00 PM
hey congratulations...I told you craig would like it :) hugs
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Chris Green
Date: 10/3/2019 4:56:00 PM
Thank you so much my friend.
Date: 9/5/2019 9:04:00 AM
I love the intimate feel of this piece. Wow, wow, wow.
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Chris Green
Date: 9/5/2019 9:13:00 AM
Thanks so much Richard. I am thrilled you enjoyed this so much.
Date: 9/4/2019 11:38:00 AM
Love this piece, especially the last few lines which remind me that, sometimes, especially when we need it most, something is placed in our perception to offer hope, love, encouragement. Glad you didn't miss it!
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Chris Green
Date: 9/4/2019 11:50:00 AM
Thank you so very much my friend. Your comments are always encouraging to me as are your poems. I really appreciate your visit and nice words to me today.
Date: 9/4/2019 10:51:00 AM
This reaches deeply within and offers so much detail I also felt for the bee, as I would in the situation you describe, if it happened. This is a special poem of reflection and thinking back in time too. Well done! :)
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Chris Green
Date: 9/4/2019 11:15:00 AM
Thanks so much Heidi for always saying such nice things to me. I truly do smile when you stop by.
Date: 9/4/2019 10:23:00 AM
I am teary, Chris!
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Chris Green
Date: 9/4/2019 10:43:00 AM
Thank you so much my friend. I am smiling because you stopped by. : )
Date: 9/4/2019 10:05:00 AM
wow...i have never seen beauty in a bumble bee before, until now... this is a gorgeous write my friend....excellent entry for the contest....:) hugs
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Date: 9/4/2019 10:11:00 AM
Thank you Sandy, I truly appreciate your kind words. I really wasn't sure about this but your thoughts made me feel much better about it. It was difficult bring a bee into the theme without actually using the word bee. : )
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