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A simple visit

Trying to get myself together, I book my dentist appointment. In the waiting room I sit. Finally, they call me, I sit on the all familiar dentist chair. Looking up, the light shines on my eyes, Giving my headache advancement, I close my eyes. Suddenly they speak of cavities. “Would you like to get fillings today?” they ask. Sure, I thought aloud. They numb my mouth, Nothing I felt, they asked me one more question. “Would you like the gas to feel more comfortable?” “Yes please”, I replied. Next thing you know I am gazing off, It leads to my mind wondering, I feel strange. Images of all my emotions pop up, They start to seem more real. I am off into a deep sleep, Me sitting in a chair carrying my son, He opened his longing eyes, My heart felt the joy of this dream. I was rocking him so peacefully, My little angel came to me in a deep sleep. I wake from the drilling of my teeth feeling at peace, The dentist told me of how peaceful I seemed, Moreover, of how tired I must have been that I fallen asleep. No idea they had of how restless I was, Nor that I am a grieving mother who had just lost a piece of her heart. I did not expect to had left the dentist feeling happy, I had a vision a created memory that put me at peace. Crazy you might think but I look forward to my next dentist appointment. ~My son Bael forever in my heart and if I’m lucky in my dreams he will visit me~

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 7/24/2016 7:45:00 PM
One of your best poems, N. J. Only comments: Line 17, did you mean to use the word, wondering or wandering? Line 28, change, I fallen asleep to I'd fallen asleep. Great write. P.S. My condolences for your loss....
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Date: 12/11/2013 4:14:00 PM
† Touching, Your Precious Beauty's Painting, Sweet Beautiful Royal! I Remember The Lose Of Your Child; Hang In There Baby Girl! Congrats In Whatever Light This May Be Upon Your Priceless Heart's Featured Verse ˜ Happy Holidays ˜ My Love, Always, John
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Date: 7/23/2013 11:23:00 AM
Truly beautiful,heartbreaking yet peaceful..
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Date: 7/12/2013 12:00:00 PM
Wonderfully described, Royal. That moment of getting your teeth pulled is indeed a memory. Enjoyable poem. Check out some of mine, might find some you like.
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Date: 7/10/2013 3:33:00 PM
Absolutely hearbreaking and beautiful dear Royal...I feel the pain and also the relief of that pain in this verse...A royal young poet you are Royal...Enjoyed talking with you yesterday too - Tim
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Date: 6/14/2013 8:52:00 AM
Good morning my bff's daughter Royal.I love that name and your avitar is priceless.Love Colleen.P.S.SMILE :)
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Date: 5/14/2013 7:50:00 AM
Gripping w/a lot of strong reflection. Kudos to you for writing a piece like this.
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Date: 5/13/2013 7:21:00 PM
WOW. This is quite stunning as it pulls the reader into your loving memory of a tragic loss. Very real and heartfelt. Have a serene evening :)
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Date: 4/18/2013 11:40:00 AM
HE IS ALWAYS THERE WITH YOU.He will visit you often in your dreams.It will be ok.Be strong and think happy thoughts even though it isnt always easy.take care.
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Date: 4/13/2013 8:07:00 AM
He is always with you and came to visit and let you know he is always with you. Now you have me in tears. Thinking of you and mom at this moment and send my hugs. love phyl
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Date: 4/12/2013 6:46:00 PM
Hi Royal, I enjoyed reading, nothing crazy about it. I speak with my little angels often, as long as I live, they live in my heart. I can always visit with them just by closing my eyes as look toward the sky. It gives me the peace and comfort you speak of in your write. peace, light and love
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Date: 4/11/2013 9:32:00 PM
Hi Royal, what a sweet poem, what a beautiful story. Your sweet Bael did visit you, you are not crazy, they watch over us and protect us, he is always with you, just keep your heart open to him. He did not want his mommy to hurt at the dentist : ) Bless You and keep up the beautiful writings, Hugs and blessings
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Date: 4/11/2013 6:27:00 PM
My little sweet Royal, sometimes we find comfort when we least expect it. I am sad.. so sad after reading this poem again. You are not crazy only a little... ha ha, you are my daughter after all. I pray for the comfort you need, ~being here with you and for you complete me, like day one all over again.... I just wish!!!! xoxoxoxox xoxox xoxox MOMMY
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Date: 4/11/2013 12:31:00 PM
I doubt you not, nor think you are crazy....lol They do visit, in our dreams when sleeping and later sometimes when awake. Good story poem here... blessings !!
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Date: 4/11/2013 6:55:00 AM
Wow!! What a poem. Now my teeth are hurting a bit. It must be a fear of dentist thing. Perhaps the next time I will ask for gas also. Take care, Jancarl
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Date: 4/11/2013 6:20:00 AM
by the way, I adore laughing gas and the restful feeling, with all my stress and insomnia lately, I wish I could afford a dentist visit myself. haha
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Date: 4/11/2013 6:19:00 AM
hey, young lady, I really like this and I'm glad the writing is helping you. A fave on this heart felt poetry.
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Date: 4/10/2013 2:51:00 PM
My Dear Royal,YOU can expect many more of these short Satisfing Visit. Each one more healing then the last. When YOU wake up in the morning, Singing and Dancing with "Bael" and pay no attention to those that do not know the Reality YOU walked out of that Dream with. As YOU write YOUR emotions with the LOVE in YOUR Heart YOU Abide in Tranquility. YOU are and Will be a Laureatus POETESS. Thank-YOU for YOUR Touching and Gracious Comment. It brought tears to my eyes. I LOVE YOU Thru Eternity...Harry
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Date: 4/10/2013 1:58:00 PM
This is outstanding poetry....its so real that it hurts even the reader. I am glad that this moment of peace found you.
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