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A Silver Tongue

Love's sacrificed on the altar of pride, when you dismissed any feelings of pain. For your arrogance denied love had died, convincing yourself I'm acting insane. The truth lies buried, hiding your intent, as you ignore the anguish in my cries. And the stain of deceit marked love's descent; as flattery and lies clouded my eyes. Naive about the status of love's fate, innocence had me pursuing a dream. And jumping ahead, unwilling to wait, I naively took trust to the extreme. A promise grown old when hope was still young, love, isn't always forever, as fabled. For when lies get spun by a silver tongue, feelings are seldom correctly labeled. As the depths of despair contort my mood; my ego, no longer rejects the truth. And my heart recoils, for sex, becomes lewd, contrary to the delusions of youth.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Gauthier Avatar
May 15, 2018 at 8:12 PM
Strong emotions, Emile.
Pinet Avatar
May 16, 2018 at 8:35 AM
Thank you very much Line, your support and kind words are very much appreciated my friend, Emile.
Williams Avatar
March 19, 2017 at 7:58 AM
Beautifully expressed Emile. I loved it.
Pinet Avatar
March 19, 2017 at 9:59 AM
Thank you very much Maria, your support and kind words are very appreciated, Emile.
White Avatar
March 17, 2017 at 10:33 AM
All the faces of love, hard to face and accept. And how it can get lost, or buried so deep you can hardly find it back.. "A promise grown old, when hope was still young". Beautiful, and yet painful.
Pinet Avatar
March 17, 2017 at 12:04 PM
Thank you very much for your visit and kind words Darren, both are appreciated, Emile.
Melugin Avatar
March 17, 2017 at 8:27 AM
Emile, this is deeper than the ocean! The truth finally burns through denial and reality soothes the soul. 7 My best to you, chuck
Pinet Avatar
March 17, 2017 at 9:21 AM
Thanks Chuck, your words of encouragement are truly appreciated, Emile.
Smith Avatar
March 16, 2017 at 3:02 PM
"ego no longer rejects the truth" Great line, a kind of come to Jesus moment, I suppose. Well done Emile...
Pinet Avatar
March 16, 2017 at 3:31 PM
Thank you very much for your support and kind words Charlie, both are very appreciated, Emile.
Callus Avatar
March 16, 2017 at 2:16 PM
'Tis a very good poem, Emile. Love can be a gamble...a cheat...double-faced...an illusion...but experience teaches us to look out for pitfalls and hopefully steer clear of them. ~ Regards // paul
Pinet Avatar
March 16, 2017 at 3:29 PM
Paul, your opinion is of great value ..as you have shown yourself to be a talented person of virtue with a strong sense of self, thank you, Emile.
Sands Avatar
March 16, 2017 at 12:57 PM
Very well written and expressed Emile. I can feel it.
Pinet Avatar
March 16, 2017 at 1:34 PM
Thank you Heidi, for your great reviews on several poems of mine ...I appreciate it, Emile.
Pigeon Tart Avatar
March 16, 2017 at 12:00 PM
Wow, sharp write Emile, so sharp I think I cut myself on its edge ;) 7 for this excellent offering xomo
Pinet Avatar
March 16, 2017 at 1:33 PM
Thank you so much Maureen, your comments are always most welcomed and eagerly sought. Emile.
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