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Love was sacrificed on the altar of pride when you dismissed my concerns and my pain. For your arrogance denied love had died, convincing yourself I'm acting insane. Truth lies buried under words of intent, ignoring the anguish within my cries. And the stain of deceit marks love's descent, where flattery and lies clouded my eyes. Naive about the status of love's fate, innocence had me pursuing a dream. And jumping ahead, unwilling to wait, I naively took trust to the extreme. A promise, grown old when hope was still young, love's not always forever, as fabled. For when lies get spun by a silver tongue, feelings are seldom correctly labeled. As the depths of despair contort my mood, my ego no longer rejects the truth. And my heart recoils, for sex, becomes lewd, contrary to the delusions of youth. (Quatrain) 3/16/2017

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Date: 5/15/2018 8:12:00 PM
Strong emotions, Emile.
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Emile Pinet
Date: 5/16/2018 8:35:00 AM
Thank you very much Line, your support and kind words are very much appreciated my friend, Emile.
Date: 3/19/2017 7:58:00 AM
Beautifully expressed Emile. I loved it.
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Date: 3/19/2017 9:59:00 AM
Thank you very much Maria, your support and kind words are very appreciated, Emile.
Date: 3/17/2017 10:33:00 AM
All the faces of love, hard to face and accept. And how it can get lost, or buried so deep you can hardly find it back.. "A promise grown old, when hope was still young". Beautiful, and yet painful.
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Date: 3/17/2017 12:04:00 PM
Thank you very much for your visit and kind words Darren, both are appreciated, Emile.
Date: 3/17/2017 8:27:00 AM
Emile, this is deeper than the ocean! The truth finally burns through denial and reality soothes the soul. 7 My best to you, chuck
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Emile Pinet
Date: 3/17/2017 9:21:00 AM
Thanks Chuck, your words of encouragement are truly appreciated, Emile.
Date: 3/16/2017 3:02:00 PM
"ego no longer rejects the truth" Great line, a kind of come to Jesus moment, I suppose. Well done Emile...
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Date: 3/16/2017 3:31:00 PM
Thank you very much for your support and kind words Charlie, both are very appreciated, Emile.
Date: 3/16/2017 2:16:00 PM
'Tis a very good poem, Emile. Love can be a gamble...a cheat...double-faced...an illusion...but experience teaches us to look out for pitfalls and hopefully steer clear of them. ~ Regards // paul
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Emile Pinet
Date: 3/16/2017 3:29:00 PM
Paul, your opinion is of great value ..as you have shown yourself to be a talented person of virtue with a strong sense of self, thank you, Emile.
Date: 3/16/2017 12:57:00 PM
Very well written and expressed Emile. I can feel it.
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Date: 3/16/2017 1:34:00 PM
Thank you Heidi, for your great reviews on several poems of mine ...I appreciate it, Emile.
Date: 3/16/2017 12:00:00 PM
Wow, sharp write Emile, so sharp I think I cut myself on its edge ;) 7 for this excellent offering xomo
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Emile Pinet
Date: 3/16/2017 1:33:00 PM
Thank you so much Maureen, your comments are always most welcomed and eagerly sought. Emile.

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