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A Shark In the Soup

a predatory silence lurks beneath the surface an unknown moment awaiting the scintillating scent of prey. triggers of instinct igniting a fire an uncontrolled conflagration burning within. erasing in the darkness all distance mercilessly driven by intuitive themes. ©12/23/2018 shark in the soup Poetry Contest sponsor – Anthony Slausin

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Date: 1/6/2019 4:26:00 PM
Congrats on the winner list. I about got my socks knocked off to see myself on the list!!
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Date: 1/6/2019 7:04:00 AM
Congrats on your win, John.
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Date: 1/6/2019 4:09:00 AM
superb take on the theme John I especially love that final stanza:-) many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 1/3/2019 2:59:00 PM
O wow! You have captured the spirit of a shark with your well chosen words
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Date: 12/26/2018 8:31:00 AM
I love your words choices! Just stopping by say hi, hope you had a nice Christmas, John.
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John Lawless
Date: 12/26/2018 9:31:00 AM
Always nice to hear from you Becca. Hope all is well with you.

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