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A Shared Kiss

It was a beautiful summers eve And we shared a kiss I couldn't believe I thought you would never leave You had a dark agenda up your sleeve Or maybe I was just so darn naive You had no real reason to deceive By doing so, what did you achieve Falling in love is my biggest pet peeve Now when summer comes I just grieve 7-14-17

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Afzal Nusker

Date: 7/21/2017 12:57:00 AM

Well written but a sad one. I hope it's fictional.

Akkina Downing

Date: 7/17/2017 2:58:00 PM

Some kiss are hard to forget ;) very nice, Alexis

Silent One

Date: 7/17/2017 6:46:00 AM

Sounds like some kiss, nice Monorhyme Alexis..

Freddie Robinson Jr.

Date: 7/16/2017 9:19:00 AM

I agree w/Chris. Your monorhymes have such a smooth flow. Sad, dark message. But the poem still rocks. Excellent write, my dear friend. Love always.

Chris Green

Date: 7/14/2017 1:30:00 PM

Nice one my friend. You do write these monorhymes well. :)

Alexis Y.
Date: 7/14/2017 2:21:00 PM

Hi Chris, Thank you so much. Fyi, I was inspired to write this monorhyme because of the one by you that I read by you earlier. I appreciate you being the first to comment:-)Alexis