A Shade From the Past

Just as days long ago, when decorum resolved, 
before composure, and poise,.. were corsages, unknown
Where propriety mattered, and was favored as gold,
high society, has gathered to flavor their tea
                                                      
There's a trellis, embraced by a rose climbing vine
Places are set, for dining in jade
beneath shadows that stretch under arthritic old trees
While slivers of sunshine, squeeze through the branches
of silver leafed limbs, in magnolia bloomed shade
 
Tea will be served, by large knuckled hands 
at several round tables dressed with Swiss lace designs
Wearing lavender silk is our proper Grand Dame'
who fits her surroundings, as vintage as wine

Voices are lilting like the birds in the trees
Laughter and chatter, mingle with soft, summer breezes 

 
A bouquet of old friends, around a few scattered tables. 
Silver coifed hairdos, to make celebration
Crepe myrtle and wrinkles, beneath ashes and maples
Water cress munchies, and triangle creations

Sweet honey-suckle, tucked over the porches.…
Rose petal blossoms, are painted on china 
Bridge cards, tumble by Blue Willow dishes
Biscuits from England, crumble sublimely

Large bosoms bouncing, and big floppy hats
Gossip dished up with lemon-sliced frowns
Up in the tree is the neighbor's calico cat
who catches a glance, and a chance to crawl down

Are they ladies of leisure, from a time that is lost?
Or a painting I've seen on the wall from the past?




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Inspired By the Garden Party Contest
Sponsored By Cyndi McMillan 6/6/14
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Suzadail Jr. Avatar
December 2, 2014 at 11:19 AM
Absolutely beautiful but then again, I wouldn't expect less. Congrats on your featured sonnet and on your win.
Richards Avatar
December 2, 2014 at 12:55 PM
It is so nice to hear from an old friend! Hope you are well, Vince, and I wish you and your family a wonderful holiday. You always have had the gift to take me back to my childhood, with your poems! Thank you for that! :)
Lindley Avatar
July 17, 2014 at 9:22 AM
Congrats on a fine win!! I knew this was a winner!!
Parker Avatar
July 16, 2014 at 8:05 PM
maybe a memory from a past life.. congratulations Carrie on this beautiful poem and your win
Hamilton Avatar
July 16, 2014 at 7:15 PM
lovely imagery Carrie congrats on win hugs
Nance Avatar
July 16, 2014 at 5:25 PM
Perfect! well done, grats on your win!! :)
Gibson Avatar
July 16, 2014 at 3:22 PM
The poem is more delicious that the food the bouncing bosom ladies ate. Really enjoyed this, Carrie. Congratulations on the first place win.
Johnson Avatar
July 16, 2014 at 10:25 AM
This is sublime. I loved it. Congratulations. Love, Joyce
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
July 16, 2014 at 6:34 AM
Wow!! Beautiful and truly remarkable Carrie..:) I love the two paintings oh poetry you have written..:) I'll put this on my fave too:) love love it..:)! CONGRATULATIONS Carrie!
Callus Avatar
July 16, 2014 at 5:22 AM
This is an excellent double sonnet, Carrie. Just like in old films and classic books/paintings. You painted it to perfection. Goes to my favs. Congratulations for a very deserved win. // paul
A. Sharma Avatar
July 16, 2014 at 2:05 AM
Well another masterpiece ,, tough poem,, arthritic I cud best understand Carrie! Every line was so majestic ,, when patiently read ,, congrats on huge win!
Guzzi Avatar
July 15, 2014 at 10:15 PM
Oh my I like yours!! [better than mine!] ditto on what Dee said & 2 both love er ly! Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
Macmillan Avatar
July 15, 2014 at 10:12 PM
Congratulations, Poet Extraordinaire. So much to love about this one. Please stop by my winner's blog... hey, the arthritic trees is sublime. Thank you for putting your all into this ... it comes across as a cakewalk, but I see all the tools you used and each line is highly polished. LOVE IT!
George   Avatar
July 2, 2014 at 5:45 AM
A double sonnet. Simly brilliant, Carrie. I hope you have entered this in the contest for something beautifu, because this is beautiful. bfn Lainie
Enriquez Avatar
June 22, 2014 at 8:52 PM
Dear Carrie: Simply lovely work. A marvelous read. Thanks. Leon
Roger  Avatar
June 19, 2014 at 1:23 PM
What a party there!! even tea ;';''') though in my world its a total different setup, I understood each single line here and trust me I cant fail to add this to my FAV right now
Lindley Avatar
June 7, 2014 at 10:39 PM
This in my opinion is a masterpiece! Elegant, precise , smooth and fantastic... Bravo, bravo and BBBravoo!!!! I simply love the past but never attended a garden party!! This gem goes into my fav!! Thank you..
Dietrich Avatar
June 7, 2014 at 10:46 AM
oh my gosh, you NAILED it. I would not know where to begin on this one. I never attended a garden party and I don't know any thing about fancy table settings!! If I do this contest at all, I will really have to think outside the box!
Nehls Avatar
June 7, 2014 at 7:18 AM
What a great visualization, Carrie. Whatever it is, real or painting, you presented it quite eloquently. I could picture myself there. Very nice gathering. Will be reading more of your poetry. Thanks for sharing.....Robert.
Mehta Avatar
June 7, 2014 at 6:08 AM
Yes, wonderful garden party , carrie
Vaso Avatar
June 6, 2014 at 7:55 PM
This is simply wonderful!!!!
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