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Crushed

I gazed, watched to replay A parade of fireflies in wild ballet-- Flickering like eve’s hue Where heaven gleamed, anew With a radiant view— Yet , cold silence left me in disarray. Until dark hours grew frail As tenuous breath forgot to inhale The fragrance of new moon, Ambrosial its tune . I hid in my cocoon, Forsaken by love’s goodbye…how pale. Night's wind--it had no song It swirled low as blackbirds drifted along-- From raking of all trees The insolent breeze Peeled new boughs with such ease, Reflecting my fate-- what went right or wrong? Then roaming without care Anguish crushed hope on a lone thoroughfare, Oh barren fate, undone A shattered plight not won … Counting myself as one Lit fireflies vanished, marking my despair. Crushed Contest of Anthony Biaanco Repost 6/18/2020

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Date: 1/14/2018 7:52:00 PM
Beautifully crafted Nette. Congratulations on your Win!!! ~Judy
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Date: 1/14/2018 3:57:00 PM
Congratulations Nette. This is beautifully expressed :)
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Date: 1/12/2018 8:20:00 AM
I enjoyed your winning poem. Hugs Rick.
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Date: 1/12/2018 8:01:00 AM
Nette, congratulations on your win in my contest with this beautiful write, soupmail!
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Date: 1/12/2018 5:30:00 AM
beautiful poem sweet Nette! congrats :)-luloo
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Date: 1/11/2018 11:01:00 PM
Wonderful, nette. Congrats on your win.
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Date: 1/11/2018 10:51:00 PM
Congratulations on your awesome win, Nette. so very sad , but beautiful.. Hugs Eve ~`*
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Date: 1/9/2018 4:15:00 PM
Words of sadness creating a deep and emotive poem... Well expressed Nette...
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Date: 1/9/2018 1:24:00 PM
a sad poem of despair, yet not deep despair, this emptiness has been felt by all at one time or another
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Date: 1/9/2018 12:28:00 PM
This is beautiful, Nette. Good luck in the contest. Love, Juli-Michelle
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Date: 1/9/2018 12:24:00 PM
Such a vivid and wonderful poem nette
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Date: 1/9/2018 12:19:00 PM
Well written..I feel the sadness and emptiness..best for a win, nette.
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