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A Sempiternal Legacy

~they embraced in their dalliance~ her appetency held a depth so deep he just couldn’t resist placing his hands around her barren waste (she reaches for him with ardor) for tonight was auspicious and ebullience showered them with the twinkles only stardust spreads; forever scattering allure and passion with strength and hankering devotion, sowing their love with intentions of... savoring each emotion they conflated as if they were always predestined to celebrate marriage different from the rest- the assuage erased the anguish; what was once atrocious is now emollient (softer than ivory silk) when hope goes awry they stand tall side by side, each wearing pride- the crookedness of life transformed into candor and honesty she decided to absolve her demure nature; feeding the emptiness with the nourishment of his reliability and fervency for her brilliant mind two auras ~kaleidoscopic~ enveloped by heaven's cobalt hues, desire for love prevails with affection her felicity swathed his soul, his serendipity ran through her veins as if she was sheathed by his charisma; a sempiternal legacy was left for the coming generational bonds yet to be formed love in the making- saved two hearts from breaking ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ 10.10.19

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Date: 1/5/2020 3:43:00 PM
Very,very nice. Congrats-Peter
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Date: 1/4/2020 9:05:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in Brian Strand’s contest. Hugs Eve
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Date: 1/1/2020 4:34:00 PM
Lulu, the triumph of love over heartbreak. A couple who cannot have children (or who lost a child?) find love and healing in one another's arms. So powerful and exquisitely worded. I learned some new words, too! Congrats, this one's a fav. ~ John
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Lu Loo
Date: 1/1/2020 7:35:00 PM
thank you dear John...you are right. Happy New Year! x:-)-luloo
Date: 11/3/2019 7:07:00 PM
this is beautifully penned Lu Loo.. i am never surprised to see you on the winner's lists, you write wonderfully....congratulations on your win:) hugs
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Lu Loo
Date: 12/18/2019 1:35:00 PM
thank you sweet Sandy- sorry for the late response, just saw some comments lol x:-)-luloo
Date: 11/3/2019 7:01:00 PM
Ahh my dear Laura I should have known you would one of the top winners! Congratulations my friend amazing g as I knew it would be!;)
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Lu Loo
Date: 12/18/2019 1:34:00 PM
thank you sweet BB! sorry for late response x:-)-luloo
Date: 11/3/2019 6:28:00 PM
This is such a wonderful write Laura, I knew your distinctive style from the first line, this is a special write from the heart full of emotion, just like I asked for, congrats on a great podium finish!
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Lu Loo
Date: 12/18/2019 1:34:00 PM
sorry for late response dear John, thank you for my placement (a lil late) lol I'm finding more comments I didn't see before... thank you! x:-)-luloo
Date: 10/10/2019 4:32:00 PM
WoW!! Lu...you go girl...bring it on my poetic sister...spill the beans why don't cha...A big winner for sure...I've started a prayer vigil...Prayers for Lia...more info at the latest potd or my latest post...^WW^ :o)
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Lu Loo
Date: 10/11/2019 7:28:00 AM
I'll make sure to get more info for the vigil. Thank you dear WW:) Be blessed :)-luloo
Date: 10/10/2019 10:40:00 AM
You pulled out the vocabulary stops on this one. I like this line "what was once atrocious is now emollient (softer than ivory silk)"
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Lu Loo
Date: 10/11/2019 7:28:00 AM
thank you sweet Sunlite. I'm trying to expand my vocabulary. It was fun learning new words! Thank you again :)-luloo
Date: 10/10/2019 9:22:00 AM
Absolutely beautiful. You get an A+ on this one Lu Loo. So well crafted and expressed. Your talent shines here my friend. Best wishes in the contest
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Lu Loo
Date: 10/11/2019 7:27:00 AM
thank you so much, that was very sweet of you dear Chris... :)-luloo

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