A Sempiternal Legacy

~they embraced in their dalliance~
her appetency held a depth so deep he just couldn’t 
resist placing his hands around her barren waste
(she reaches for him with ardor)

for tonight was auspicious and ebullience showered 
them with the twinkles only stardust spreads;
forever scattering allure and passion with strength 
and hankering devotion,
sowing their love with intentions of...
savoring each emotion

they conflated as if they were always predestined 
to celebrate marriage different from the rest-
the assuage erased the anguish;
what was once atrocious is now emollient 
(softer than ivory silk)

when hope goes awry they stand tall side by side, 
each wearing pride-
the crookedness of life transformed into candor and 
honesty
she decided to absolve her demure nature;
feeding the emptiness with the nourishment of 
his reliability and fervency for her brilliant mind

two auras ~kaleidoscopic~
enveloped by heaven's cobalt hues,
desire for love prevails with affection

her felicity swathed his soul,
his serendipity ran through her veins as if she was 
sheathed by his charisma;
a sempiternal legacy was left for the coming 
generational bonds yet to be formed

    love in the making-
saved 
         two 
hearts from breaking 

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

10.10.19

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019



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Date: 1/5/2020 3:43:00 PM
Very,very nice. Congrats-Peter
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Date: 1/4/2020 9:05:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in Brian Strand’s contest. Hugs Eve
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Date: 1/1/2020 4:34:00 PM
Lulu, the triumph of love over heartbreak. A couple who cannot have children (or who lost a child?) find love and healing in one another's arms. So powerful and exquisitely worded. I learned some new words, too! Congrats, this one's a fav. ~ John
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Date: 1/1/2020 7:35:00 PM
thank you dear John...you are right. Happy New Year! x:-)-luloo
Date: 11/3/2019 7:07:00 PM
this is beautifully penned Lu Loo.. i am never surprised to see you on the winner's lists, you write wonderfully....congratulations on your win:) hugs
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Date: 12/18/2019 1:35:00 PM
thank you sweet Sandy- sorry for the late response, just saw some comments lol x:-)-luloo
Date: 11/3/2019 7:01:00 PM
Ahh my dear Laura I should have known you would one of the top winners! Congratulations my friend amazing g as I knew it would be!;)
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Date: 12/18/2019 1:34:00 PM
thank you sweet BB! sorry for late response x:-)-luloo
Date: 11/3/2019 6:28:00 PM
This is such a wonderful write Laura, I knew your distinctive style from the first line, this is a special write from the heart full of emotion, just like I asked for, congrats on a great podium finish!
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Date: 12/18/2019 1:34:00 PM
sorry for late response dear John, thank you for my placement (a lil late) lol I'm finding more comments I didn't see before... thank you! x:-)-luloo
Date: 10/10/2019 4:32:00 PM
WoW!! Lu...you go girl...bring it on my poetic sister...spill the beans why don't cha...A big winner for sure...I've started a prayer vigil...Prayers for Lia...more info at the latest potd or my latest post...^WW^ :o)
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Date: 10/11/2019 7:28:00 AM
I'll make sure to get more info for the vigil. Thank you dear WW:) Be blessed :)-luloo
Date: 10/10/2019 10:40:00 AM
You pulled out the vocabulary stops on this one. I like this line "what was once atrocious is now emollient (softer than ivory silk)"
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Date: 10/11/2019 7:28:00 AM
thank you sweet Sunlite. I'm trying to expand my vocabulary. It was fun learning new words! Thank you again :)-luloo
Date: 10/10/2019 9:22:00 AM
Absolutely beautiful. You get an A+ on this one Lu Loo. So well crafted and expressed. Your talent shines here my friend. Best wishes in the contest
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Date: 10/11/2019 7:27:00 AM
thank you so much, that was very sweet of you dear Chris... :)-luloo
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