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My Shangri-La . . . seeking, through the corridors of my mind; lost- I meander like a seeker blind, opening doors loudly creaking. An imaginary place of sweet divine bliss, idyllic utopia, and nirvana remote; where tranquil water lilies float, I want a Shangri-La abyss. But, I have gone astray, finding myself climbing up stairs; while a worldly vision of me just stares, oh Lord, help me find my way. Then, I open a hidden wooden obscure door, to a beautiful green haven hide away; a place where there is never decay, no pain- no sorrow to endure. _________________________ September 12, 2019 Poetry/Enclosed Rhyme/A Search For Shangri-La Copyright Protected, ID-19-1180-489-02 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym. Written for the contest, Pick a Title, Vol. 9, Enclosed Rhyme sponsor, Edward Ibeh, Theme chosen - A Search For Shangri-La Fourth Place

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Date: 10/3/2019 6:37:00 PM
beautifully penned my friend, congratulations on your win :) hugs
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Date: 10/3/2019 11:03:00 PM
Sandra, thanks so much for the beautiful and the congratulations !

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