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A Scene From Back Bay Station I Shall Never Forget

slimy concrete. diesel smoke. November turned brown. she stands slumped and uncertain and overly burdened. a cold wind. a distant whistle echoes. a rumbling underneath. the mighty Engine pulls up through crumpled earth. the too-young mother asks sweetly: are you ready Leona? the little girl smiles and twists on the balls of her feet.

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Date: 12/1/2015 10:03:00 PM
Whoops .. The two question marks below my comment were smileys that ended up as question marks! Cheryl ( lol)
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Date: 12/1/2015 10:01:00 PM
I love how you present this wonderful positive frontier of psychology where the nurturing virtue competes against a possibly foreboding and troublesome life of a " too young a mother" with her child. Victory reigns amongst misery and adverse circumstances with a gentle and reassuring voice complimented by a tender smile! The child has been gifted emotional sanctity. Bravo here! Do take a bow! What a triumphant way to end this possibly bitter sweet sojourn... Cheryl ??
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Date: 6/3/2015 12:39:00 PM
god, beautiful imagery. so intense, so natural. I'm in awe.
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Date: 5/7/2014 8:30:00 PM
Ben Dear. oh my stars my dear. I love the imagery .. it has me in the underground train station that is what I am picturing.. and the young mother and the little girl not sure.. hugs and lots of luv dear heart.. Brooke
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Sam Toil
Date: 5/7/2014 8:59:00 PM
My dearest Brooke, I live for your approval. Thank you so much. Luv & Hugs;) Ben
Date: 5/1/2014 6:20:00 PM
So thoughtful and, also, thought provoking.
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Sam Toil
Date: 5/2/2014 6:40:00 AM
Thanks, Faye, for stopping and leaving your compliment for me to treasure. You, too are becoming a PoetrySoup friend of mine -- I have you on my list of Favorite Poets so I don't lose track of you. Peace...Sam
Date: 5/1/2014 11:05:00 AM
Very descriptive and expressive work.. I could see the scene..Enjoyed reading this one today..The storm wasn't too bad in our area no tornadoes just rain(lots), some thunder and lightning and wind. The wind blew and blew with gust up to probably 35 or 40 MPH but not like tornado force..Spring brings with it some rough weather sometimes. Just glad that it wasn't any worse. Thanks for reading my work and taking time to comment. Sara
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