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A Saddened Heart

The rain has been falling steadily, as the day has turned to night. Shrouding the scene, a dismal gray before completely losing light. The pelting raindrops fall noisily against the skylight overhead At times, muffling the sound of the waves, usually heard instead. With the rain, came the wind, not intending to be left behind. Adding volume to the din that will end tonight's peace of mind. The night is totally dark, not a glimmer of star or moonlight. Not even a ship at sea's flickering beacon can break through this night. Watching the sheets of rain run down the glass of the door. As if it is cleansing, washing away evidence of what was there before. I thought, if only the same could be done for a saddened heart. That nature's own, cleansing rain, could renew, refresh, restart. To wipe away, all traces of pain, before all hope was gone. So a heart, with little left to give, can have reason to go on.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 12/16/2018 4:27:00 PM
A wonderful thought that the rain could wash away the pains of our past, Sandy, unfortunately that cleansing can only come from within. Wishing you a happy holiday season. John
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Sandra L. Weiss
Date: 12/16/2018 6:57:00 PM
You do look familiar...but Thank you for taking the time to read and comment, it is appreciated, but not necessary!! Happy Holidays to you too, enjoy them.
Date: 12/16/2018 9:06:00 AM
This is absolutely beautiful and has perfect rhythm with it! A saddened heart can be cleansed, renewed and re-started. There are re-visits to the pain, but it is all a process. Well done! :)
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Sandra L. Weiss
Date: 12/16/2018 9:39:00 AM
Thank you so much Heidi. Once again trying to write " beautiful". Your enthusiastic comment was just what I needed!

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