A rose by another name-1288

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Sotto Poet

Date: 2/23/2024 1:11:00 PM

Dear SVThis piece is undeniably magnificent, truly exceptional. It conjures a surreal impression and atmosphere that enthralls the reader. I am particularly enamored with your use of free verse, a sentiment echoed by numerous individuals. Despite this, your poem triumphs, as each line delivers a clever reinterpretation of well-known expressions, revealing your remarkable aptitude for whimsical diction.

Speaks Volumes
Date: 2/23/2024 1:39:00 PM

Love your enthusiasm dear friend, just another N/A to add to my huge and growing collection, but I admit I am having fun writing and that's what counts. Thank you for the glowing acceptance of my effort. . Wen

Yann Rolland

Date: 2/22/2024 3:16:00 PM

this create a surreal impression, atmosphere, i love free verse as others, you make a fascinating "bric à brac", do'nt know the english word, but the poem is successful, thanks poet

Speaks Volumes
Date: 2/22/2024 3:27:00 PM

Bric a brac works perfectly Yann, I use that phrase in conversation. Some time I feel my head is full of Bric a brac. Thanks for your lovely comment. I am trying to learn the right way to do footles, and Sweet Andrea has helped me for future attempts. I hope I am a good student. Cheers dear friend . Have a happy day. Wen

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/21/2024 9:09:00 PM

These may not be exactly footles but I can see the humor in them. That last one is really cool.

Andrea Dietrich
Date: 2/24/2024 9:15:00 PM

Hmm will look into that

Speaks Volumes
Date: 2/21/2024 10:37:00 PM

I wonder should I re-name them free verse ? I might try that. Nothing to lose ? Thanks for the idea Andrea. Nope cant do that, I just looked it already been read. :( Oh BTW Valsa just commented on my poem The reason I may not always seem normal. Why don't you use the reply section of her comment to talk to her?