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A Romantic Meeting

A romantic meeting (humor) I finally asked the girl in the flower shop if she wanted to go out with me say, Saturday night To my surprise, she said yes. I will meet you under the railway clock at eight she said. I came there well before eight but stood on the other side of the road It was winter and dark, but I had noticed a young woman who I assumed was waiting for the train to arrive. The train came and left, she looked at her own watch and left. Stubbornly, I stood there well past nine and concluded she was not coming My feet were cold, and I felt betrayed. Women!!!

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Date: 7/23/2023 11:32:00 AM
Hello Jan Hansen, Waiting for a date in an area dark at night is scary for a woman alone. Being stood up waiting for the date to show and does not show, hurts. Best to meet some one for a date in a area where there a people around . Enjoy your day my friend /Darlene\
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