A Ridiculous Comparison- My Husband and Pumpkin
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July-22-2025
12 Lines or Less Ridiculous Comparison's Poetry Contest
Sponsor- Miranda Hawley
My husband is like a ripening pumpkin
Loves to lie down inert on the ground, most of the time.
Lack of exercises has made his belly bloat,
Like pumpkin, that now he looks a comic sight.
A pumpkin carved in shape with a light inside,
Serves as an adornment in Halloween season.
Though funny to view, he is beautiful inside,
With a light shining bright all through the seasons.
As the pumpkins are so versatile and can be put to use,
In making a number of dishes, both sweet and savory,
He has multi talents and adds so much of spice to my life,
That without him, I will be like a flat tyre with no spare!
Copyright © Valsa George | Year Posted 2025
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