A Riddle

What are they? -- carried with us in the vault of sleep, in strides and steps of the day….

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Victor Buhagiar

Date: 2/25/2024 2:11:00 AM

My first reaction is dreams. Hope it's not snores :)

Joe Dimino
Date: 2/26/2024 7:59:00 AM

You got it, Victor -- dreams! And my dreams and aspirations are probably snores to many:) Blessings my friend.

Joe Maverick

Date: 2/25/2024 1:21:00 AM

Indeed if we think we have the answers we Need to think again' we grasp some things Yet there is so much to learn.'

Joe Dimino
Date: 2/26/2024 8:01:00 AM

Indeed, about self and others. Many point out to me what I did not fully see in my own works -- "I get by with a little help from my friends" -- Have a great day, Joe!

Hilda Greenhough

Date: 2/24/2024 11:41:00 PM

I cheated and found the answer in replies. This was fun. Thanks for a new creation.

Joe Dimino
Date: 2/26/2024 8:02:00 AM

Cheating or just, cut to the chase -- time is precious. Blessings my friend.

Silent One

Date: 2/24/2024 7:59:00 AM

Thoughts.... I guess...

Silent One
Date: 2/24/2024 10:39:00 AM

Women know best Joe....

Joe Dimino
Date: 2/24/2024 8:53:00 AM

My wife, Ila, said thoughts, so I guess both will work. Thank you, Si.

Vijay Pandit

Date: 2/24/2024 6:21:00 AM

I am guessing they are life's dreams that make living a joy. Very creative and original thought, Joe.

Joe Dimino
Date: 2/24/2024 8:54:00 AM

Right On! You got it. Dreams.