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A Reverie

Floating down reveries
easing a mind troubled,
guarding hope like gold;
long tales of love told, 
with you right next to me…
where you belong. 

Reveries flow in the breeze, 
fated to whisper secrets
into the willow trees-
nourished by nutrients
of kind carresses,
ruffled by sated dreams;
and through it all I smiled,
with you right next to me…
where you belong. 

Saturated in loneliness
was I before ebon became 
white-
you freed me from links 
of rust worn around my
ankles,
allowed my eyes to have 
the marvel of sight;
even in the Winter freeze 
I see what no one sees,
purity of God’s reveries-
with me right next to you…
right where I belong.



Favorite Word Poetry Contest
August 16, 2019 

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Date: 8/18/2019 7:47:00 AM
iT IS IMPOSSIBLE TO LIVE WITHOUT REVERIES,,,!YOUR WRITE IS SENSIBLE AND CUTE, SALUTE ALKAS
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Lu Loo
Date: 8/18/2019 9:48:00 AM
thank you Alkas :)-luloo
Date: 8/17/2019 3:45:00 PM
A wonderful write Laura, a word that I noticed that you use often in your poetry, a great word packed with meaning, well done!
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Lu Loo
Date: 8/18/2019 9:48:00 AM
yes too much actually! but oh well, sometimes when I get a word I really like I have a tendency to overuse it lol but reverie is def a fave for awhile now. thank you! :)-luloo
Date: 8/16/2019 8:13:00 PM
Sometimes our reveries keep us alive in lonely times of our lives, enjoyed your poem dear Laura Loo xo
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Lu Loo
Date: 8/18/2019 9:46:00 AM
many thanks pleasant Pixie (you!) lol you are sweet...:)-luloo
Date: 8/16/2019 12:47:00 PM
- A wonderful poem ... so sweet, L.L. - GL in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 8/18/2019 9:42:00 AM
thank you sweet SS :)-luloo