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A Resolution For Life

I lost at least twelve pounds in this past season. Since turning sixty, I have made a goal to get back to my old self. The reason is that I hated that unholy roll around my middle! Now it’s mostly gone. However, I still want my old size ten. So I will keep the diet I’ve been on, but when I reach my goal, I won’t stop then! I’ve vowed to eat less often things that use so many additives. They are so bad. I’m older! Better foods I need to choose. Quite tasty ones these past few months I’ve had while losing weight. I know it can be done. But once a week I’ll cheat to keep it fun! Written Dec. 20, 2015 for Shadow Hamilton's the Resolutions Poetry Contest

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Date: 1/31/2016 10:09:00 PM
Andrea, Congrats on your "Resolutions" win. XOX -LINDA-
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Date: 1/24/2016 6:55:00 PM
Congrats on your top placement Andrea! *smiles*-luloo
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Date: 1/24/2016 6:28:00 PM
Congrats Dear.. Yes, go ahead and cheat once in awhile. BG
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Date: 1/24/2016 5:25:00 PM
I am so so proud of you Andrea you have done so so well on your diet and good on you for indulging in a little treat once a week:-) congrats on your top spot:-) hugs Jan xx7
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Date: 1/1/2016 10:45:00 AM
Andrea, you beautiful inside and out, the weight thing is probably due to all the poems you write that are made up of sugary treats.
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Date: 12/24/2015 11:24:00 PM
I've gotta get into this contest business 'cos I can spot winners... and this is one! BRAVO Andrea! Best wishes, Keith
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Date: 12/24/2015 11:07:00 AM
well done! Janice
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Date: 12/23/2015 12:45:00 PM
The holidays are dangerous. One vows to cut down and one ends up eating more fat than usual. Actually, I love ya just the way you are. daver
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Date: 12/23/2015 12:41:00 PM
Your words took stage and treated the reader to a glimpse of your imagination as your magic pen scratched paper and brought forth such a witty poem edged with guilty thoughts. Very well written. Emile.
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Date: 12/23/2015 9:24:00 AM
The cheating part is almost as important as the 'educating' yourself part, i.e., additives, etc. A fun dedication to a series resolution. A cheer for you and believe in you. Carry on ... CayCay
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Date: 12/22/2015 9:54:00 PM
Loved this, man you are good, I have the same kinda rule, I cheat once a year, from February to December!
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Date: 12/22/2015 6:48:00 PM
Good for you..stay off the sodas if you haven't already..water my friend..water..Merry Christmas
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 12/22/2015 6:58:00 PM
I HATE water, but I am doing as much as I can, and adding lemon and Stevia powder to it sometimes.
Date: 12/22/2015 6:45:00 PM
I see you are off to an early start. Good for you! Thanks for all your thoughtful visits throughout the year. Merry Christmas to you and those you love.
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Date: 12/22/2015 6:21:00 PM
As per your answer below then I am even more impressed. Breathe, breathe us poems a many....cause we luvs them...already faved...nuff said!
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Date: 12/22/2015 5:42:00 PM
Andrea ,a good poem with a message we all should try to do. Good luck in the contest. Merry Christmas . Anne
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Date: 12/22/2015 4:54:00 PM
I commend you!! Good for you! I'm just SO not motivated. Boo HOOO....Hugs, woman. I'm wondering...are you going to be a Premium contest sponsor. You should be! What's all this hullabaloo about the contests, eh? I mean...I think sponsors should do what they want. They ARE paying members...sheesshhhh...I mean, I think the no names and the less placements...two entries max for each place is a good idea, but....I don't think they should be enforced. I post that on a blog that went...missing!
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 12/22/2015 4:56:00 PM
I still don't like enjambment, though you sonnet is nice....
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 12/22/2015 4:55:00 PM
posted...posted...ha ha...edit edit edit. I responded to your comment on Jan's blog, dear. Merry Christmas if I don't catch you before that.
Date: 12/22/2015 8:51:00 AM
Love this poem Andrea on dieting. Congratulations on your success. If you have a chance I would love your feedback on my new poem. By the way I am very impressed you wrote this as a sonnet!
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 12/22/2015 6:16:00 PM
don't be impressed, writing in iambic pentameter is like breathing for me!
Date: 12/22/2015 7:35:00 AM
A very beautiful sonnet expressing your resolution this year my dear friend, Andrea. I enjoyed reading it tonight and your last line made me smile:)) I know this will do well in the contest. Thank you so much for sharing and for stopping by on my poem. Thank you also in advance for the card you've sent. Hope it'll finally reach me this year. Thank you so much for everything. Big Merry Christmas Hugs!
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Date: 12/22/2015 2:47:00 AM
Dieting spoils all the fun of the holidays. Congratulations on your weight loss. I always seem to stay the s ame weight no matter what. Good entry for the contest Andrea.
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 12/22/2015 6:31:00 PM
Not full scale dieting right now sweetie. but trying to maintain. After Xmas it is back to my rice with chicken dish I created using turmeric!!
Date: 12/22/2015 12:23:00 AM
I'd check your birth certificate if I were you, young lady, coz you don't bloody well look sixty to me.... All these resolutions seem to be fine, especially finished with a glass of white wine. Viv x
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 12/22/2015 6:36:00 PM
the photo is at least five years old. DANG it.

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