A Rescue

She knew that this man
smelling of fire and danger
had rescued them
from a terrible fate

and to show her gratitude
she transverse the rubble and
took advantage of the opportunity
to thank him by licking his face

and as she nuzzled close to that
dirty tear stained face
the fireman stroked her softly
and they were
for a moment in time
man and his best friend
together sublime

and even though all around the noise
of the cries and the shouts were heard
even through this din
both hearts were beating
with the love of each other within.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 2/23/2011 4:42:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win in Joyce's contest Cherilyn. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/5/2011 6:04:00 AM
Many congratulations Cherilyn on your win in Joyce's contest with this little gem....:)
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Date: 2/4/2011 4:59:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. You have great descriptiveness in this entry.
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Date: 2/4/2011 1:35:00 PM
Hi Cherilyn - Congratulations on your win in Joyce's contest. Best wishes, Kory"
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Date: 2/4/2011 12:31:00 PM
Wonderful write cherilyn!Congrats on your win--kashinath
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Date: 2/4/2011 9:42:00 AM
Wonderful writing, Cherilyn. Many congrats on your win. Lainie
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Date: 2/4/2011 9:40:00 AM
You describe the photo beautifully, Cherilyn. Congratulations on your win! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 2/4/2011 7:56:00 AM
Congrats Cherilyn on your winning poem in Joyce's contest with this extraordinary entry luv.. enjoy your top ten sweet success...
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Date: 2/4/2011 7:26:00 AM
Cherilyn, good to see you in the top ten. Agape, Moses
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Date: 2/4/2011 1:17:00 AM
hi cheri... what a fabulous feel this piece is..bouquets for you on your happy win in the contest! ..:) huggs, nette
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Date: 2/3/2011 10:52:00 PM
Congratulations on you fine win in Joyce's "Doggy Gratitude" Contest, Cherilyn. Always, Annalise
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Date: 2/3/2011 10:20:00 PM
Very emotional write Cherilyn. I enjoyed. Love, Joyce
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Date: 1/21/2011 9:05:00 AM
The weekend is upon us once again and I hope yours is wonderful and that you might find the inspiration to keep writing your excellent poetry. It was a pleasure to read your poetry this morning Cherilyn. Love, Carol
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