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A Rescue

She knew that this man smelling of fire and danger had rescued them from a terrible fate and to show her gratitude she transverse the rubble and took advantage of the opportunity to thank him by licking his face and as she nuzzled close to that dirty tear stained face the fireman stroked her softly and they were for a moment in time man and his best friend together sublime and even though all around the noise of the cries and the shouts were heard even through this din both hearts were beating with the love of each other within.

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Date: 2/23/2011 4:42:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win in Joyce's contest Cherilyn. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/5/2011 6:04:00 AM
Many congratulations Cherilyn on your win in Joyce's contest with this little gem....:)
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Date: 2/4/2011 4:59:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. You have great descriptiveness in this entry.
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Date: 2/4/2011 1:35:00 PM
Hi Cherilyn - Congratulations on your win in Joyce's contest. Best wishes, Kory"
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Date: 2/4/2011 12:31:00 PM
Wonderful write cherilyn!Congrats on your win--kashinath
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Date: 2/4/2011 9:42:00 AM
Wonderful writing, Cherilyn. Many congrats on your win. Lainie
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Date: 2/4/2011 9:40:00 AM
You describe the photo beautifully, Cherilyn. Congratulations on your win! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 2/4/2011 7:56:00 AM
Congrats Cherilyn on your winning poem in Joyce's contest with this extraordinary entry luv.. enjoy your top ten sweet success...
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Date: 2/4/2011 7:26:00 AM
Cherilyn, good to see you in the top ten. Agape, Moses
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Date: 2/4/2011 1:17:00 AM
hi cheri... what a fabulous feel this piece is..bouquets for you on your happy win in the contest! ..:) huggs, nette
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Date: 2/3/2011 10:52:00 PM
Congratulations on you fine win in Joyce's "Doggy Gratitude" Contest, Cherilyn. Always, Annalise
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Date: 2/3/2011 10:20:00 PM
Very emotional write Cherilyn. I enjoyed. Love, Joyce
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Date: 1/21/2011 9:05:00 AM
The weekend is upon us once again and I hope yours is wonderful and that you might find the inspiration to keep writing your excellent poetry. It was a pleasure to read your poetry this morning Cherilyn. Love, Carol
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